Morning, as I promise I will give you a review. I am a slow reader, I like to put my self in the main character position. Dan, he has a lot of memories, I wandered what he will do with it? I like you story line, I can get the ideal you have for the MC. His adventures and who are his friends and Who are his enemies. I would like to read on and see where the story goes. Oh... Yes I love you MC. I wonder if he have any romance along the line? With the girls? Hahaha... Lol. Anyway this is your first novel and it's not bad. I like it. Keep it up!!! You will get better in writing along the ways. Don't worry about spelling and grammar.. you can ask someone for help, after you are done. TQ for the novel. *Wink* + *bow* 😍😍😍😝😝(TT)
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