1. Too fast and i bet anyone other than author reads it will not able to undersantd even 2% of the things that happen 2. .Overpowered MC is understandable but if you can't even know how MC get these power than there is no fun in reading this. 3. Other characters that are introduced (like goddess and person who make fun of MC) have no character development or any other information after mentioning them once.
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