Yes, the demon king is indeed very adorable. I was going to put this at the end but the bathing scene in chapter 7 is so hot I just had to get it off my chest and write it down here as soon as possible. For the longest time, I thought I was straighter than a line drawn in a world where there are only two dimensions, but today my faith has been shaken. Now then, where was I? Oh right, the review. When I first started reading it, the grammar bothered me a little, but the narrative was so fun and lighthearted I soon forgot about it. It's not so bad that it makes the sentences difficult to understand and each and every sentence is so fun to read the slight grammatical errors just stopped bothering me even when I noticed them. Of course, it'd be best for the grammar to be improved upon, that goes without saying. So far I haven't read far enough to truly get to the meat of the story, but just going by the narrative and character interaction, I'd say without a doubt that this is a fun read, and if you're into BL, then it's even better.
Froschmo
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LIKEFroschmo:Thanks for the review!!! I will try to improve the grammar. So your faith have straightened yet? Come, come, I welcome you to the dark side lol đđ