Review Detail of TacoBrownies in Elder Scrolls: Naruto

Thought id give a review. I won't mention your grammar because youve already stated that your learning but first and foremost your chapters state you have an "Editor" which is higjly unlikely because a middle schooler could fix the grammar issues present. The characters are really base and have no actual depth you take 1 percent of a person and make it a 100. The story is half rant and half OP mc. You continously complain about naruto while writing a story you deem as "better" than naruto. Theres a reason your not Kirishima. To counter your argument about naruto, you state that the story is full of plotholes. Chakra is meant to be an energy in all living beings and handsigns are meant to focus the energy into certain forms or affinities. Near the end of the story all the antagonists had reached a state of understanding that superseded regular shinobi so stop spouting bull****. The MC is just a version of yourself that you wish to be. 5 languages? You havnt even finished 2. Anger issues? In check but apparently in the story its okay to be angry all the time. You just want to live in a fictional world and wrote one of the worst fan fictions inserting yourself just to do so. Being an author is more than just writing. Its understanding and being open to what a story really is and adapting yourself to it. As stated before your characters are empty driven by a single emotion when a human being is a multitude of emotions and actions. Theres so much more to writing you havn't even begun to understand. If writing is what you want to do then please go and study to make yourself be the best you can. You seem to a person who just thinks theyre already the best.