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This used to be a well written story at least until c 60. I used to look foward for a new chapter, mC have its own mind not a goofer or your typical rpg stick toon, the system is also well tought just like a SKYRIM HUD NO *ding* new mission host gotta do this or that* no status screen filler every chapter no mission sjust HuD. He’s quite a scheemer he use what he know will happen for example the seven sword accident, he stole em all and with a good reason too otherwise his village will lose em, he saved pakura, whatever he do its his choicenot because of some system told him todo. So its quite refreshing story. Aftet that arround chapter 60 it goes downhill fast, mc do stuff without a clear reason. The clone that he made to save haku go rouge it have its own feeling againts other girl while mc is training at swamp for 5 years according to the wiki shadow clone have a small but constant link between clone and host for example naruto is aware what his clone does (again this is from wiki)thus what happen is quite impossible. After chapter 70 it went from bad to abyssal mc went crazy without a good reason ,i wont say what he did in that chapter other review already state it, but what i want to say is some deed that he did have a good reason, my problem is with the other deed imo it happen because author want it to be because mc have no good reason to do such deed, and when i ask author told me that it happen because of the darkside of narutos world he tell me to not watch thi book from a rose colored glasses its on chapter 74 comment i think, some might like all that evil stuff. they might say that it just happen no need a good reason, as for me? no action happen without impetus no matter how absurd how improbable that action is there is always a motive and impetus. This went againts all that mc build since chapter one, heck even violent tendencies that mc suffer does not warrant such big behavioral change. Read at your own risk, im dropping this book. What i like from this book is already gone.

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Elder Scrolls: Naruto

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Nier_Xue
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A solid review and I agree with you..