Review Detail of Jojo775 in Elder Scrolls: Naruto
Review detail
I know the standards for novels here at rock bottom, but I didn't expect one of the top fictions to be such trash. It's just another reincarnated baby that already walks and talks at the age of 1 lol, Self Insert that thinks he can write a better Naruto because he is angry due to obsessing himself with plotholes. So much for a better Naruto, author(Self Insert) thinks just because he knows hand seals he can immediately preform those jutsu and that clones can regenerate chakra and make infinite clones ROFL. They can also take punches and heal hahaha, anyway I've read about 4-5 chaps which is 2 too much.
Elder Scrolls: Naruto
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Qidian has some great translated work...fanfiction is mix feeling bro...mix feeling, at least it's easier to navigate here and find what you're looking for if they have it, unlike fanfiction,net- which is a literal mess(but I can't argue that they do have so great one hiding under the mountain of lemon and some weird fetish)...reading fanfiction is a way to pass time while you wait for the translate works to publish it chapters.
it might just be me; and i might be prejudice but try reading uzumaki yurei it's good and i don't think it's trash
Oniichan_Thickskin:Qidian has some great translated work...fanfiction is mix feeling bro...mix feeling, at least it's easier to navigate here and find what you're looking for if they have it, unlike fanfiction,net- which is a literal mess(but I can't argue that they do have so great one hiding under the mountain of lemon and some weird fetish)...reading fanfiction is a way to pass time while you wait for the translate works to publish it chapters.
I have common sense and I've read dozens of fanfics(with even the worst one being better than this one) so I pretty much know what can and can't be done.
Narvales:You act like you know more about Justus than the actual Naruto characters. xD Nothing in the fanfic was inherently against what was stated in the manga. There is much room for interpretation in Naruto in general. That’s what I liked about it.
Yes. Use common sense in a word where flicking your fingers makes a water dragon come out. Do you even know what Naruto is? Kiba can fly cause he spins his arms fast enough... My problem is not that you find the fanfic far fetched, but that every one of your examples exaggerated part of the plot to an extreme. You probably didn’t read much of it to begin with.
Jojo775:I have common sense and I've read dozens of fanfics(with even the worst one being better than this one) so I pretty much know what can and can't be done.
Pls why are you even defending this trash, have you ever read something that wasn't written by a **** with a bad grammar? I already said I've read 4-5 chaps though it was clear this novel couldn't be bigger trash by 2 chapters but I gave it a chance.
Narvales:Yes. Use common sense in a word where flicking your fingers makes a water dragon come out. Do you even know what Naruto is? Kiba can fly cause he spins his arms fast enough... My problem is not that you find the fanfic far fetched, but that every one of your examples exaggerated part of the plot to an extreme. You probably didn’t read much of it to begin with.
If this story has bad grammar, then there is literally no such thing as good grammar. If anything, you need to learn a bit more about grammar. Btw, what is “a grammar”? You have worse English than the story you’re whining about... Who are you to judge? xD
Jojo775:Pls why are you even defending this trash, have you ever read something that wasn't written by a **** with a bad grammar? I already said I've read 4-5 chaps though it was clear this novel couldn't be bigger trash by 2 chapters but I gave it a chance.
Bitch please, I'm typing fast so I make mistakes. This "discussion" is over, if you're gonna read and defend trash fanfics, be my guest. I was only here for The True King of The Pirates, Narutoverse and Skyrim, but those went dowhnill or were dropped. There is literally not one good fanfiction here, enjoy it and goodbye.
Narvales:If this story has bad grammar, then there is literally no such thing as good grammar. If anything, you need to learn a bit more about grammar. Btw, what is “a grammar”? You have worse English than the story you’re whining about... Who are you to judge? xD
Lol. If you really believed anything you just said, you wouldn’t have written the review in first place, because you’d be on other sites. Just admit it. The fanfic isn’t bad, it’s just that you were insulted by whatever the author said to you. You wouldn’t be the first thin-skinned person to write a bad review just to get back at an author that didn’t worship the readers.
Jojo775:Bitch please, I'm typing fast so I make mistakes. This "discussion" is over, if you're gonna read and defend trash fanfics, be my guest. I was only here for The True King of The Pirates, Narutoverse and Skyrim, but those went dowhnill or were dropped. There is literally not one good fanfiction here, enjoy it and goodbye.
ROFL I am mostly on other sites, I was just here for those 3 and checking out the most popular ones, which turned out to be of the same quality as the least popular = garbage. I am not insulted by the author, did he even insult me? Even if he did I don't care, this just shows how much of a cancer **** he is(why is t33n filtered?). All I did was write an objective negative review, what was I supposed to do, give another biased non-informative 5 star review? "This is the best story ever!!!!!! (I have seen in all of 13 years of my life! because I'm an immature brat and can't bother reading anything but wish fullfilment chunni novels)" Wow what a review.... Anyway I don't know what's wrong with you, other than being delusional and making **** about me and having ****ty taste in novels, but I'm not about to have pointless arguement with a senseless person. No more replying for real even if I'm curious what asinine thing you're gonna say next.
Narvales:Lol. If you really believed anything you just said, you wouldn’t have written the review in first place, because you’d be on other sites. Just admit it. The fanfic isn’t bad, it’s just that you were insulted by whatever the author said to you. You wouldn’t be the first thin-skinned person to write a bad review just to get back at an author that didn’t worship the readers.
Trust me this ff is really bad. Try reading Yami: The Gamer Kage Son of Gato The shinobi seeking Immortality Shinobi: The RPG - Act1 (I think this is where the author got this idea from. Also Skyrim, but this novel is dust compare to this one) Rooting for you A measure of darkness Breaking Limits: Tenacity A ****** teenage shop owner The root of Darkness Kill or be killed A world full of monsters Legacy A lot more. Most of the above are SI. Thank me later
Narvales:Lol. If you really believed anything you just said, you wouldn’t have written the review in first place, because you’d be on other sites. Just admit it. The fanfic isn’t bad, it’s just that you were insulted by whatever the author said to you. You wouldn’t be the first thin-skinned person to write a bad review just to get back at an author that didn’t worship the readers.
CestMoi:Trust me this ff is really bad. Try reading Yami: The Gamer Kage Son of Gato The shinobi seeking Immortality Shinobi: The RPG - Act1 (I think this is where the author got this idea from. Also Skyrim, but this novel is dust compare to this one) Rooting for you A measure of darkness Breaking Limits: Tenacity A ****** teenage shop owner The root of Darkness Kill or be killed A world full of monsters Legacy A lot more. Most of the above are SI. Thank me later
If you’re mostly on other sites, why are you even bothering to come back to this “trash”? Objective review? More like applying “common sense” to Naruto and dubbing yourself an expert without equal. My problem is not that you dislike the novel, but that you’re using your flawed knowledge to flame it. As you’ve said earlier, you’re basing what can or can’t be done based on other fanfics. You do know that fanfics by definition aren’t the real thing? If you can give me an actual reason clones can’t take damage, then be my guest and persuade me otherwise.
Jojo775:ROFL I am mostly on other sites, I was just here for those 3 and checking out the most popular ones, which turned out to be of the same quality as the least popular = garbage. I am not insulted by the author, did he even insult me? Even if he did I don't care, this just shows how much of a cancer **** he is(why is t33n filtered?). All I did was write an objective negative review, what was I supposed to do, give another biased non-informative 5 star review? "This is the best story ever!!!!!! (I have seen in all of 13 years of my life! because I'm an immature brat and can't bother reading anything but wish fullfilment chunni novels)" Wow what a review.... Anyway I don't know what's wrong with you, other than being delusional and making **** about me and having ****ty taste in novels, but I'm not about to have pointless arguement with a senseless person. No more replying for real even if I'm curious what asinine thing you're gonna say next.
No he is not talking bout that.. he talking bout MC being 'realistic' ninja.. realism? Lol.. even author said he thinks Naruto is 'unrealistic' hero as he didn't kill anyone in his whole life.. I mean seriously bro.. that what made Naruto the MC.. Naruto convinced pain!!! Why did pain was convinced..? Because he knew Naruto was different.. author always spits MC from his novel is realistic.. fuq that realism.. all I see a freaking sociopath with no morals what so ever.. he is like the 2nd Danzo or oroc himaru.. a real freak..
Narvales:If you’re mostly on other sites, why are you even bothering to come back to this “trash”? Objective review? More like applying “common sense” to Naruto and dubbing yourself an expert without equal. My problem is not that you dislike the novel, but that you’re using your flawed knowledge to flame it. As you’ve said earlier, you’re basing what can or can’t be done based on other fanfics. You do know that fanfics by definition aren’t the real thing? If you can give me an actual reason clones can’t take damage, then be my guest and persuade me otherwise.
CestMoi:Trust me this ff is really bad. Try reading Yami: The Gamer Kage Son of Gato The shinobi seeking Immortality Shinobi: The RPG - Act1 (I think this is where the author got this idea from. Also Skyrim, but this novel is dust compare to this one) Rooting for you A measure of darkness Breaking Limits: Tenacity A ****** teenage shop owner The root of Darkness Kill or be killed A world full of monsters Legacy A lot more. Most of the above are SI. Thank me later
CestMoi:Trust me this ff is really bad. Try reading Yami: The Gamer Kage Son of Gato The shinobi seeking Immortality Shinobi: The RPG - Act1 (I think this is where the author got this idea from. Also Skyrim, but this novel is dust compare to this one) Rooting for you A measure of darkness Breaking Limits: Tenacity A ****** teenage shop owner The root of Darkness Kill or be killed A world full of monsters Legacy A lot more. Most of the above are SI. Thank me later