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Roktah
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its a good novel but how come nobody asks questions about the mc. The mc was raised by his mom who is not a ninja for one year. after that he entered an experimental training during which he learnt no ninjutsu taijutsu etc.. only meditation to increase chakra after that he was put into 3 year long incubation chamber. The day after he woke up he straight up used water dragon jutsu, he explained advanced ninja knowledge to his jounin teacher and nobody asked how he knew all that? he was 1 year old barely able to speak, was then put in stasis for 3 years and suddenly knew all that and nobody asks him how? this is a world full of ninjas during war times. thats whats been bugging m about this novel, the mc knows too much and nobody cares, so 3 stars for story and character development. character got 3 stars bc he is a little too ruthless and brutal for somebody from modern earth. killing is ok, fast and clean but his first kill he actually put his sword away and let his clones beat her into a bloody pulp before he cut her into two(it was during an exam with no enmity between them). there is more but i'm writing too much so i'll stop here

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Elder Scrolls: Naruto

Myumara

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Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

I honestly don't think you're even reading it, you even explained it yourself. Mei was clearly suspicious BUT Shes know him since he was 1 years old!! So he couldn't possibly be a spy. And in a world where bloodlines give you magic powers, a 4-year old doing water dragon jutsu isn't even the craziest thing. You must know nothing of Naruto world.

Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

Even his father was a ninja so he could have left a scroll. Either way if your student was exceptional and you knew his background was clean, besides a little suspicious what reason is there to ask a million questions???

Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

why do i know nothing of naruto bc i question why nobody wonders where that 4 year old boy with no training school or background got so much knowledge from, that normally genins that went through the academy don't posses? i never said he was a spy thats what you put into my words what i said is why does no one seem to care? they are ninjas mistrust deception, information gathering ect. is what they use to make a living. he must be a genius is not the answer to the thing he did bloodline? a bloodline would still need to be trained which he again had no time to do. bloodlines may give you special abilities but knowldge still has to be aquired the old fashioned way.

Myumara:I honestly don't think you're even reading it, you even explained it yourself. Mei was clearly suspicious BUT Shes know him since he was 1 years old!! So he couldn't possibly be a spy. And in a world where bloodlines give you magic powers, a 4-year old doing water dragon jutsu isn't even the craziest thing. You must know nothing of Naruto world.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

I'm not going to sit here and argue with you, clearly you just don't get it and that's ok. All I want to say is I'd never want you as a teacher if all your going to do is question your students and no one likes a paranoid person. Mei clearly knows he's special, that's why she stopped him when he was spinning the card. Just ask yourself, hundreds of other people seemed to get it, so maybe you should read a little deeper into things before you say you don't understand. This is a fanfic for naruto fan and you obviously don't know Mei and she is a very protective person so whatever.

Roktah:why do i know nothing of naruto bc i question why nobody wonders where that 4 year old boy with no training school or background got so much knowledge from, that normally genins that went through the academy don't posses? i never said he was a spy thats what you put into my words what i said is why does no one seem to care? they are ninjas mistrust deception, information gathering ect. is what they use to make a living. he must be a genius is not the answer to the thing he did bloodline? a bloodline would still need to be trained which he again had no time to do. bloodlines may give you special abilities but knowldge still has to be aquired the old fashioned way.
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

nothing what you said actually countered my argument, paranoid maybe i am, but so are ninjas. a majority voted for brexit, trump was electd president,a lot of ****ty novels get 5 star ratings, just bc a lot of people do something does'nt mean they are right.maybe these hundreds of people need to read deeper, then they would notice it too or they noticed and just did'nt bother commenting in it. protective? of a kid she met briefly for 3 times? a scroll left behind? there is no point leaving a scroll that explains things that you would get to know as a genin or chunin anyway. a scroll for secret clan jutsu?sure, a scroll for bloodline training? sure, a scroll for non top secret ninja knowledge? why bother. i did'nt want to argue either,you initiated this.

Myumara:I'm not going to sit here and argue with you, clearly you just don't get it and that's ok. All I want to say is I'd never want you as a teacher if all your going to do is question your students and no one likes a paranoid person. Mei clearly knows he's special, that's why she stopped him when he was spinning the card. Just ask yourself, hundreds of other people seemed to get it, so maybe you should read a little deeper into things before you say you don't understand. This is a fanfic for naruto fan and you obviously don't know Mei and she is a very protective person so whatever.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

Lol the more you talk the more I realize you are a closed minded person who thinks everything you do is right and you are a special chosen one who can see nothing no one else can. You obviously know nothing about Naruto if you think every technique isn't written down on a scroll, do you think everything is learned from word of mouth? Every time you type you prove you know nothing.

Roktah:nothing what you said actually countered my argument, paranoid maybe i am, but so are ninjas. a majority voted for brexit, trump was electd president,a lot of ****ty novels get 5 star ratings, just bc a lot of people do something does'nt mean they are right.maybe these hundreds of people need to read deeper, then they would notice it too or they noticed and just did'nt bother commenting in it. protective? of a kid she met briefly for 3 times? a scroll left behind? there is no point leaving a scroll that explains things that you would get to know as a genin or chunin anyway. a scroll for secret clan jutsu?sure, a scroll for bloodline training? sure, a scroll for non top secret ninja knowledge? why bother. i did'nt want to argue either,you initiated this.
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

when did i say techniques are'nt written down all i said is that there is no point in his father leaving behind a general knowledge scroll. closed minded? if you actually bring viable arguments, then i will change my mind but you did`nt. you call me close minded but look at you.you have no viable arguments and yet you insist that i'm wrong and that you are right, if i'm closed minded then what are you? you claim i have no knowledge of naruto over and over even though i watched the anime and read the manga. btw the question i originally asked is: "why does nobody question where he got his knowledge from" if a one year old(3 years in stasis so does'nt count those) that just learned how to talk and move his body semi proficiently, suddenly busts out with advanced ninja knowledge and high rank techniques, then i would have some questions, disregarding the world im in, but even more so in a ninja world.

Myumara:Lol the more you talk the more I realize you are a closed minded person who thinks everything you do is right and you are a special chosen one who can see nothing no one else can. You obviously know nothing about Naruto if you think every technique isn't written down on a scroll, do you think everything is learned from word of mouth? Every time you type you prove you know nothing.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

Itachi was already an excellent ninja when he was 4, Kakashi graduated from the academy when he was 5 and became a chunin at 6!! Every time you type you prove how ignorant you are of naruto!!! Just stop!

Roktah:when did i say techniques are'nt written down all i said is that there is no point in his father leaving behind a general knowledge scroll. closed minded? if you actually bring viable arguments, then i will change my mind but you did`nt. you call me close minded but look at you.you have no viable arguments and yet you insist that i'm wrong and that you are right, if i'm closed minded then what are you? you claim i have no knowledge of naruto over and over even though i watched the anime and read the manga. btw the question i originally asked is: "why does nobody question where he got his knowledge from" if a one year old(3 years in stasis so does'nt count those) that just learned how to talk and move his body semi proficiently, suddenly busts out with advanced ninja knowledge and high rank techniques, then i would have some questions, disregarding the world im in, but even more so in a ninja world.
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

itachi was the heir of the uchiha clan. he was a genius yes but he had access to all the knowledge and resources of his clan and they did everything to develop him additionally itachi was'nt in stasis for 3 years he was 6 years old and was trained by the best konoha had to offer since he was 1 year old(5 years of training). comparing their circumstances only an idiot would do that. Every time you type you prove how ignorant you are of naruto!!! Just stop!

Myumara:Itachi was already an excellent ninja when he was 4, Kakashi graduated from the academy when he was 5 and became a chunin at 6!! Every time you type you prove how ignorant you are of naruto!!! Just stop!
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

And you just completely ignore Kakashi who wasn't from a clan because it completely proves your point wrong? I feel sorry for your parents for having a moron for a child.

Roktah:itachi was the heir of the uchiha clan. he was a genius yes but he had access to all the knowledge and resources of his clan and they did everything to develop him additionally itachi was'nt in stasis for 3 years he was 6 years old and was trained by the best konoha had to offer since he was 1 year old(5 years of training). comparing their circumstances only an idiot would do that. Every time you type you prove how ignorant you are of naruto!!! Just stop!
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

kakashi was a genius too but he too graduated from the ninja academy and had a place and time(even if little definetly a few years) to develop. and kakashi's clan is called the hatake clan most famous for the white fang his father, so him having no clan.... i think your knowledge is lacking.

Myumara:And you just completely ignore Kakashi who wasn't from a clan because it completely proves your point wrong? I feel sorry for your parents for having a moron for a child.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

It's ok that your opinion was wrong, and I also forgive you for being ignorant. I know my story is the only thing that brings joy to your life so I'll make sure to take good care of you Roktah ;) obviously you didn't read my review. Make sure you keep reading ok?

Roktah:kakashi was a genius too but he too graduated from the ninja academy and had a place and time(even if little definetly a few years) to develop. and kakashi's clan is called the hatake clan most famous for the white fang his father, so him having no clan.... i think your knowledge is lacking.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

Having a last name doesn't mean you have a clan 'Buddy'

Roktah:kakashi was a genius too but he too graduated from the ninja academy and had a place and time(even if little definetly a few years) to develop. and kakashi's clan is called the hatake clan most famous for the white fang his father, so him having no clan.... i think your knowledge is lacking.
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

i actually did miss the fact that you mentioned kakashi as well but it does`nt really matter as what applies to itachi applies to kakashi as well as the village supported him. i'm more surprised that you're still trying to prove a point. look at you nitpicking every little unnecessary detail to try and win this argument. A little advice if you have to do this then you've already lost.

Myumara:And you just completely ignore Kakashi who wasn't from a clan because it completely proves your point wrong? I feel sorry for your parents for having a moron for a child.
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

the hatake clan is a real thing as his father was the strongest swordsman of konohoa he earned the right to his own clan. even if kakashi is the only member now a clan is a clan.

Myumara:Having a last name doesn't mean you have a clan 'Buddy'
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

ah so you're actually the author. my opinion is'nt wrong and the ignorant one is you. but you being the author explains why you're so defensive. i do enjoy reading it but that does'nt mean i'm not going to point out flaws. that is what the review section is for afterall.

Myumara:It's ok that your opinion was wrong, and I also forgive you for being ignorant. I know my story is the only thing that brings joy to your life so I'll make sure to take good care of you Roktah ;) obviously you didn't read my review. Make sure you keep reading ok?
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

Yes and technically Sakura is a member of the Uchiha clan but so what?!? What 'Resources' did Kakashi have to GRADUATE from the academy at 5, not attend. Any Naruto fan wouldn't have a problem with my Mc learning a b rank ninjutsu in a day or walking because a fucking idiot like Naruto can do it. In a world where 5-year-olds graduate academies no one would find it that odd that someone that went through a secret experiment. The only one who would care is MEI Who would be suspicious?!? All the top leadership is dead beside madame yan and the Mizukage. Is MEI going to be sorry kid you're too smart and good, gonna have to kill you? EVERYONE ELSE WHO WOULD CARE IS DEAD and all the rest can do is tell MEI like Mangetsu did. I don't know whats so hard for you to understand.

Roktah:the hatake clan is a real thing as his father was the strongest swordsman of konohoa he earned the right to his own clan. even if kakashi is the only member now a clan is a clan.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

Wait, is the author tag not next to my name?

Roktah:ah so you're actually the author. my opinion is'nt wrong and the ignorant one is you. but you being the author explains why you're so defensive. i do enjoy reading it but that does'nt mean i'm not going to point out flaws. that is what the review section is for afterall.
Myumara
MyumaraAuthorMyumara

No, but seriously dude I just like arguing over the internet, don't take it personally. You seem passionate enough about my story to argue with me about it so you seem like an ok guy. But I'm still gonna write you in and **** you up.

Roktah:ah so you're actually the author. my opinion is'nt wrong and the ignorant one is you. but you being the author explains why you're so defensive. i do enjoy reading it but that does'nt mean i'm not going to point out flaws. that is what the review section is for afterall.
Roktah
RoktahLv15Roktah

you're welcome to do that

Myumara:No, but seriously dude I just like arguing over the internet, don't take it personally. You seem passionate enough about my story to argue with me about it so you seem like an ok guy. But I'm still gonna write you in and **** you up.