Review Detail of Eddicted in The Era of Evolution

1.your novel has a lot of grammer mistakes. 2.your mc is not really mc.he is nothing different from a side charecter 3.you may want to build a world background but all you did is explain and elongate what readers will normally understand and dont need explaining and there by making nearly 36 chapters into fillers and you give unstable updates.you take a very small thing and take an entire chapter to explain it.it looks like you just want to post something to show.you are writing a game genre but didnt go into any action for 40 chapters No wonder you got only 14 reviews in nearly 4 months.who would even be interested in reading a novel that is concentrated on just stating useless,uninteresting stuff for so long. As a reader i would like to suggest you drop this novel as it only makes you look like a writer with "lack of sincierity" and who just wants to elongate the chapters and stuff it with fillers to keep it going. But if this is not what you really meant to write,then i suggest you to write a new novel with some action,real interesting story(not elongating,explaining useless and easily understandable stuff,very excessive useless communication that is neither comedy nor important nor entertaining),making mc powerful not just some guide and caretaker. Goodluck