Not bad for a starter author... its great though u have a tendency to write the obvious... like impossible this impossible that- idiot! U already have a summoned pet ! Yet u still stating the fact that those are inpossible?! Come here let me smack ur head off and i promise to be gentle ... And too much yada yada ... ! Over all ill give u a 3.5 ...
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