If even the author doesn't have the confidence about the stories they wrote why even bother to read it. So i'm just gonna give myself a 5 star review. If you have any criticism about the stories that i write please elaborate and give me some advice. Please give a review and comment about my novel if you interested in it.
Pleki
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LIKEThanks for the support and advice. I will try to improve my grammar; As for cleaner and editor, I will hold back on hiring them as I really can't afford to spend money on hiring for my hobby.
li_bandz:Great novel however the translation quality makes reading it a hassle due to the poor grammar, if you could hire a cleaner to make the reading experience smoother it would definitely be appreciated!!
NormalUser:it's really a good novel but you explain a lot in the beginning and its kinda boring .you can explain the world building or other information slowly or explain it while you progressing your story.
Thanks for the advice I will try to keep improving my writing skills. As for longer chapters, I'm afraid I can't do that as many peoples demand a stable update and with longer chapters, it means a longer writing time. I will try to find another way to solve this problem; Maybe keep the story with slight info dumb in between rather than mass info dumb like I do in earlier chapters.
NormalUser:it's really a good novel but you explain a lot in the beginning and its kinda boring .you can explain the world building or other information slowly or explain it while you progressing your story.