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Really read with interest, the plot is entertaining. But right away, as a reader, I have questions, maybe the answers will be given in other chapters? but for the time being I have such questions -What for the ancients? Why did they put them? What are they? What caused the feud between the cosmic kings and the ancients? Who are the allies of the ancients? What is the general pedigree awakening system? What other pedigrees are there? On the other hand, as I have already been pointed out to by a more knowledgeable reviewer, too many details lead to the loss of the artistic description of the novel. and how to find a middle ground? That it was not too boring, but also to make it clear what was going on? question. questions? I have no answer yet, but maybe the author has it? It is interesting that a woman is more bloodthirsty than a man. Something the culting of the cosmic king, the campaign on the ugly duckling, who then turned into a beautiful swan, I had such an analogy. IMHO very good insertion of humor, the story comes to life immediately. getting brighter! Silk? Is it like an internal system? Interesting! I will say that the plot is original, there are no borrowings from other novels, events develop slowly, but interestingly, the idea is revealed, there is humor that brightens reading, makes you smile, improves your mood. So, the author, knowingly writes, if his novels are capable of changing the mood! The only minus that other reviewers have pointed out is a slow update. But this is probably due to the fact that less is more, although in the novel it was written more better than less. But the author is right, it is better to write small chapters, not so much, but already clarified. Instead of presenting a pile of primitive diamonds, the author gets one or two already cut diamonds! It was a metaphor. Thank you for such an interesting work, respect the author! Waiting for more!

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