This story was bad main character was inconsistent and its personality the female harem was super Bland and you could tell that they were only there for wish fulfillment the other living God's where disappointments with the one with the bow just basically being his b**** and following all his orders with no will of his own the ending was so trash and didn't make any sense at all( how the hell can a living God defeat the very thing that created it) but the one thing that got on my nerves the most what's how every character in the story just put up with the main characters b******* and nobody ever gave him a piece of their mind the main character never gets any development man the story is bad this isn't even good to kill time. What makes all of this worse is that people are actually telling this author this is a good story without actually telling him any of his mistakes or asking him to improve will tall people trying to get into the story I'll just say this it's at the bottom of the rankings for a reason you're better off going to go read Supreme magus or the one story with the ants now those are some good Original Stories with actual character consistency
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