Review Detail of lynerparel in My Second Life Across The Other World

Okay here is my honest review, first of like me and most other original authors in webnovel, the novel is in need of editing. Second I feel like the chapters are too short around 500 words per chapter I think, I guess it would have been better with a thousand words per chapter. Now onto my review of the novel itself, well honestly this is the first time I read a novel with the female mc being something like a male xianxia mc. Basically perceived as weak but in reality really strong. The first chapter suddenly dropped me right smacked dab in the middle of the whole story which gave me a bit of a shock. Well over all this novel is pretty interesting, for me depending on how the author makes the mc hide her other identity as the reaper would make this a reading experience with a lot of potential. :) Respect to all original authors who share their stories. :)