Review Detail of d11111 in Daedalus

Let's be honest here, the original section of this website is mostly comprised of s-h-i-t writing. However Daedalus is an exception to the norm. The quality of writing, character development and the plot can compare with the best of webnovels(including chinese ones), and in many areas it is also much more superior to them. It is much more like an actual published novel that went through many rounds of editing, with a clear plot and intriguing characters. I believe that this novel is the only one that is worth being published among the heap of trash that is the original section of this website. The writing is professional, with little to no grammar mistakes or inconsistencies. There is very little to none deus-ex machina and plot armor which is very popular in all web novels. I find myself drawn in by the characters and their interactions, as well as the mystery aspect of the world building. The slight kingdom building(or company building in this case) elements are a major and significant part of the most enjoyable scenes in the novel. All characters have their personalities and motivations, which are slowly being unraveled. I would also like to point out that this novel is one of the few novels(including published novels as well as webnovels) who uses multiple POV very well, without diluting the storyline or making pointless infodumps about characters that we don't care about. They are not common, and when a different POV is shown, it is impactful to the overall picture. Overall, I give this novel 5/5, and writer you really have my admiration for being able to craft and present such a story as a non professional writer. If there is one thing that I would like you to improve on, it would be the romance aspects. You've already slightly revealed some pretty good build-up, but I hope we can see at least some sort of harem because all the female characters you've crafted are very good that I almost can't make a choice. It also seems you already know how to make a very good harem without making the mistakes of japanese and chinese writers. But I still ship Daeda x Axelzero(she is very cute)