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pipMcDohl
pipMcDohlLv55yr
2019-02-21 20:05

If you have never read a typical Chinese trashy story, this novel might be an eye opener for you. The world background is poor. The characters are one dimensional. Girls are non existent, just pretty trophies that are bound to fall for the MC. Warning about Sexist content. Young masters and their stupid clans will antagonize the MC for lame reasons only to get humiliated and destroyed. The plots are not well planed, instead they revolve around the same bad guy archetype that appear out of nowhere, ask to be slapped in the face then disappear while the MC is depicted as bad-ass. Since this story seems to be built with crafting and game element in mind, you would expect something from it. No. The MC is OP from the start without real need for items to boost his strength so if he ever craft some OP items, it will just go from Easy difficulty setting to super easy. Worse, the ingredients, i mean the super rare type/impossible to find, are now appearing out of thin air in front of the MC. To sum it up, in just 22 chapters this story has already laid solid foundation for a totally garbage story that have no real goal but to use the same boring setting again and again. And, of course, the MC personality is garbage as well but described as super cool by the author. He is a complete moron that never stop to think but is described as a genius. The illusion might work because all the bad guy are dumb to the extreme. The game system part is fake, this is just another typical piece of junk that Chinese seems to love.

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13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

Gey that's races.

13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

Gay=> Hey

pipMcDohl
pipMcDohlLv5

It's not intended to be racist. For example, i like coiling dragon who has better story telling, world building, etc... But it's a fact that there is a certain type of culture of creating cheap webnovel based only on moronic psycho MC enjoying to trample any foes that come to him with child like mentality of "you want some? i will kill all of you bastards, yes, i dare". those type of webnovel is especially common with Chinese authors. Don't get it wrong, i do not say "chinese are trash". i do say there exist a typical type of cheaply written story that chinese enjoy. look "against the gods", "king of gods" and other stories, they are big success yet the story is poor in many aspects with s-xist content against women. Am i racist for telling that those novels do exist and are success? in the same way i could have said "i dislike Korean trashy MMOrpg" where monsters are lined up in spawning spots and you have just to kill them and they pop fast and there is not just one spawning spot but many so that every player can choose his spot and enjoy grinding . MMOrpg that are just grinding, grinding, then grinding, grinding, grinding. South Korean loved those grinding stuff while i thought that was going too far and made the world unrealistic and poor. I don't say Korean are crazy in the head, it's just that they enjoy something that is poor in term of game experience and story telling. Fine, i'm glad if they enjoy it.

13th_Night:Gay=> Hey
13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

Oh

pipMcDohl:It's not intended to be racist. For example, i like coiling dragon who has better story telling, world building, etc... But it's a fact that there is a certain type of culture of creating cheap webnovel based only on moronic psycho MC enjoying to trample any foes that come to him with child like mentality of "you want some? i will kill all of you bastards, yes, i dare". those type of webnovel is especially common with Chinese authors. Don't get it wrong, i do not say "chinese are trash". i do say there exist a typical type of cheaply written story that chinese enjoy. look "against the gods", "king of gods" and other stories, they are big success yet the story is poor in many aspects with s-xist content against women. Am i racist for telling that those novels do exist and are success? in the same way i could have said "i dislike Korean trashy MMOrpg" where monsters are lined up in spawning spots and you have just to kill them and they pop fast and there is not just one spawning spot but many so that every player can choose his spot and enjoy grinding . MMOrpg that are just grinding, grinding, then grinding, grinding, grinding. South Korean loved those grinding stuff while i thought that was going too far and made the world unrealistic and poor. I don't say Korean are crazy in the head, it's just that they enjoy something that is poor in term of game experience and story telling. Fine, i'm glad if they enjoy it.
LostEra
LostEraLv15

This is a very good review. To the point and accurate. The mc is an idiot who only sees himself and has no ability to plan at all. Plot armor is in constant effect otherwise he would have died several times in the first 5 chapters alone. The story is unimaginative, the characters are horribly written and the opponents are even worse. It's just an utter piece of crap for a novel

Wakeless
WakelessLv3

I personally like it.. but having 30-40 pages turning into 15-21 after going premium not to mention the constant fillers kinda makes the once great story both lacking and annoying seeing as you only get one short filler chapter a day.

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Dr_SaltedFish
Dr_SaltedFishLv11

As usual, I read to chapter 10 to get a feel of the fic before writing a review. Author is at least honest about where this story is heading with the chapter 1 face slapping, I appreciate that, that's why I continued instead of dropping it immediately. Typical mary sue character in a typical trashy xianxia plot; a typical author's self indulgent fic. I also didn't know otakus are so OP irl. Can talk smoothly to girls/people, "manly aura", adapting to new world instantly, can start slaughtering monsters 1 month in, cold calm and collected in intense fight after 3 months. Word choice from either author or translators are weird. Don't use obscure/difficult words if readers have to check dictionaries for their meaning, and stop using words with negative connotations to make characters seem "cool", it just comes off like a 14 year old wannabe edgelord. After the whole psychopath thing, all I can see here is the next coming of Ted Bundy. He gets to talk to a pretty girl a few chapters later, and you know he's going to start collecting those Barbie dolls eventually. There are always morals that are highly suspect with these type of fics, that in turn makes me doubt the author themselves. Main point is usually the way they treat other people, it's ****ty and insidious. Then they create excuses to minimize the consequences, sometimes even forgoing that and just bleaching themselves white. Nothing organic about the interactions at all, no different than robots trying to emulate human. Like all other badly written self indulgent fic that will get you nowhere, it's never going past 2 stars for me.

hawlol
hawlolLv4

Story is about a crafter but his power doesn't come from crafting but from magic he learns from some master after he wakes up. The crafting isn't exciting or interesting. The author just say "he crafted x,y potion and sold them". He was supposed to come from a game but there is no LITRPG elements, no mana, status or anything. There aren't even levels and no explanation is given on why he can't won't learn higher level spells or why one spell is stronger than the other. Even though his avatar was a low level smurf, aparently he has equiped legendary equipment on it? Who does that? Aren't there level requirements? MC had supreme mage avatar in a game though luck? Makes no sense just like the rest of the story. He is the overpowered biggest dikus major laser supaman hero only because he is the MC and that's it, who cares about logic in storytelling. A crafter that doesn't get stronger with his items but by learning spells and blasting everyone that offends him. The crafting is just an excuse to make money and fame fast. He kills manticores, wyverns and other strong beast in one spell at the first chapters, even though he only has level 1 spells, just because the author said so, and his real enemy when he gets to a city is... you guessed it, a **** for brains YOUNG MASTER! (that later decided to kill him with the whole backing of his family because some girl rejected him) This is a copy and paste wuxia novel, poorly written and with so much faulty and cringy worldbuilding. The author has no idea how games work nor how to properly set a western/game-like magical system. This is terrible!

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