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Alsreal
AlsrealLv105yrAlsreal

Read up till the latest chapter, have to say, I'm glad I didn't vote for this trash novel. The summary was pretty telling on what kind of novel this will be, and I was not wrong. There is no consistency in the author's writing. He writes himself into a corner, then break the wall behind him so that he isn't cornered. Plot is typical subpar revenge types, and from many of the chapter comments, seemed to be a patchwork of other novels too. Says there's no job restriction in equipment, items all appeared with job restrictions. Game only up for first day and MC already grabbed 3 or 4 "hidden" quest? Milk a skill for easy monies. Meet beauties. Meet cardboard "arrogant young master". Meet a good number of "elites". Get noticed by "elites". Assuming MC has been playing continuously because super nutrients, what about the "elites"? 1 day old game, already people claiming themselves "elites" lol. Already there's "established elite/legendary guild". Also, exp needed to level up is ridiculous, must take casual players months to even get to level 10. Losing a level every time you die is pretty stupid mechanic too, a level 99 dying would probably smash his helmet in rage. I also don't know how the author is gonna write out the revenge plot. If he's not going to be bothered with the traitor and just shoot to the top, then revenge plot without revenge? If he is, then what next? Befriend him again to f*ck his a*s hard? Or just be a giant d*ck to an "innocent" guy who haven't done what he was suppose to do? Anyways, typical revenge plot with sides of plagiarism. Inconsistent and flat story, bland characters with sides of ***ism. This author managed to speed up the decay of the story, mediocre novel overall.

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Shmeb
ShmebLv11Shmeb

Nice copy lmao, its true though so you get a free pass

Alsreal
AlsrealLv10Alsreal

Needed to give 140 characters so I was like why not copy paste another review

Shmeb:Nice copy lmao, its true though so you get a free pass
GandoraX
GandoraXLv6GandoraX

That's the genius thing ive ever heard

Alsreal:Needed to give 140 characters so I was like why not copy paste another review
Pripriri
PripririLv5Pripriri

HAHAHA we all need to erase our common sense when reading this

furyxcrow
furyxcrowLv11furyxcrow

Just go and read Harry Potter if you want all thatšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

furyxcrow
furyxcrowLv11furyxcrow

Just go and read Harry Potter if you want all thatšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

furyxcrow
furyxcrowLv11furyxcrow

Just go and read Harry Potter if you want all thatšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

Zayah
ZayahLv15Zayah

Early chapters are a mashup of From what I've seen and have read to compare... ā—Rebirth of the Thief who Roamed the World ā—Kings Avatar ā—Rebirth of the Strongest Swordsmen I'd say more because I know it's definitely a mix of more than this, but I havent read many more from this genre because I try not to get into them because revenge VR series or Gaming series tend to follow the same plot for a whole lot of the early game/chapters/arc's.

GoldenFateCoin
GoldenFateCoinLv4GoldenFateCoin

I felt my brain cells literally dissolve themselves while reading that

furyxcrow:Just go and read Harry Potter if you want all thatšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4Shiro_MSFA

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)