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Review Detail of Vanbun in The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage

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The story started out very interesting and it kept me hook for while then I kinda drop it cuz the FL and ML is lacking too much communication and it was just the same problem over and over. Eventually the story start developing and you do see the growth of the chacrcter but it was still lacking. The story got stretch out so much that there was no actual complete/ consequences of the problem that the character was dealing with. for instance; 1.what happen to Gu Jingze’s dad after he return to the family? What did he start doing? Or when he suddenly start missing and Gu jingze went to go look for him and return without him? 2.how did the couple deal with xue mengqi after the incident? 3. All the other couple need more story development and how their feeling started to grow 4. Why did they yun family hated the Gu family so much that they plot from so early on yet they want their daughter to married into the Gu family? That doesn’ make sense 5. How did Lin Che’s mother even end up with the Lin family? And when she came back she didn’t even go visit her mother til her funeral. Overall it was interesting but story development is lacking.. the ending felt so rush with a few chapters of each couple and not the overall ending.

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The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage

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