Review Detail of PrimordialKai in A Wizard's Secret

The story is enjoyable because I’ already invested in the path the mc is walking and the final outcomes There could have been more explanation on the mechanics of the magic system, from runes, potions, even how spell casting works, it’s dexterity, means of control. A couple paragraphs here and there could have tied that up succinctly One of the biggest plot holes is his family. I loved when they introduced the love interst and things moved along quick. But after that the Wilson household complete disappear from the story. He’s essentially a deadbeat. The story move one and majority of his time is spent as a solo adventure, climb, I love that no one is weighing him down but the relationships are all fleeting.