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Writing Quality 3 stars Stability of Updates 4 stars Story Development 4 stars Character Design 5 stars World Background 5 stars Writing Quality - Maybe a bit of proofreading could help. I understand that English is not your first language so grammar is not a problem for me but maybe spelling and capitalization could be checked a bit more. Stability of Updates - This just came out so I cannot rate this but I put in a 4 because I have high hopes for new, original novels. Story Development - This novel's development is ok at best. It is a bit fast paced with a lot of new information crammed into the first chapter and the synopsis, but it is still bearable. maybe the information of this new world (Liberty) could be spread out a bit more. Character Design - 5 stars because I like Igza. He seems to be hell-bent on revenge, which I understand but don't make him too powerful because that would ruin the uniqueness of the novel... World Background - 5 stars but like I said before in the development area, it could be a bit more spread out. Actually, if you look through some of the other new novels, you would know that I love to read new novels for some reason...I want to write a novel of my own so I understand that writing is hard so I'm trying to not be too critical about my reviews.