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JSJJ
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2018-09-01 13:04

All I can say is that this novel is different, but in a good way. I have not read a dating simulation story quite like this before. Writing Quality: It's quite good with no plainly visible mistakes , although the use of the phrase of this king is a bit jarring. Stability of updates: I binged it, so no comment Story Development: Quite slow paced , but it is acceptable since this is a beginner arc and the author does not drag on the scenes Character Design: the date-ables could use some more fleshing out, especially Attori since she is the main waifu, but since this is the introductory arc the author might grace us with more info in future chapters. World Building: The narrator himself is still in the process of discovering this suddenly real world. So hopefully more info in future chapters

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Thank you for the detailed review :)

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