Review Detail of Zehell2218 in The Food Sage
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suggestion: please make a good synopsis. I often see many novels have good writing and plot but don't have good synopsis which completely bury their novel among other novels. U must know the first thing reader see is cover and then synopsis so by not making good synopsis it's just the same as not making any door in ur house for people to enter.
The Food Sage
immortalnoob
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Something happened to my discord a while back. I am so sorry, I had went on hiatus for a long time due to school. I hope you are doing well!!! I'll be going back to this novel later this year. I tried adding your discord tag but I am assuming you changed it? My new one is Masaya#6639 because my discord nitro ran out
Eslyna:I sent but guess u didnt receive? Mines 'My RAMEN#1473'
I didn't say it's bad don't u see what I said? :v one more this author is my friend and he ask me to read + give review I just give my honest review not to mention I help if the author want me to help in the synopsis as well. So what u said about me nitpicking man whatever
Eslyna:What would u consider as good for this then? I feel like u r just nitpicking the author :/ Of course its not the greatest, but not necessarily bad either
I reread it to make sure since u got me confused, but its still the same as I remembered... You basically said it was bad and saying he/she should make it better. I'm not hating on u or anything, I'm just wondering what u would put as synopsis if u were the author since the one right now isnt necessarily bad I think, but again not the greatest
Zehell2218:I didn't say it's bad don't u see what I said? :v one more this author is my friend and he ask me to read + give review I just give my honest review not to mention I help if the author want me to help in the synopsis as well. So what u said about me nitpicking man whatever
Zehell2218:I didn't say it's bad don't u see what I said? :v one more this author is my friend and he ask me to read + give review I just give my honest review not to mention I help if the author want me to help in the synopsis as well. So what u said about me nitpicking man whatever
I say, make a good synopsis maybe the word suitable it 'proper' since synopsis that short, in usual novel, tend to be ignored that's not synopsis. I do tell the author in private how to make good synopsis anyway u stand up for the author and that's good 🤔 maybe my way of making the review is a bit stiff cuz no emo or too direct
Eslyna:I reread it to make sure since u got me confused, but its still the same as I remembered... You basically said it was bad and saying he/she should make it better. I'm not hating on u or anything, I'm just wondering what u would put as synopsis if u were the author since the one right now isnt necessarily bad I think, but again not the greatest
UwU Thanks for standing up for lil ol' me. I can't believe my highkey dead novel actually has people
Eslyna:ik its suggestion to improve, I'm just curious thats all, not hating or amything
immortalnoob:UwU Thanks for standing up for lil ol' me. I can't believe my highkey dead novel actually has people
Zehell2218:oy son tell ur fans I'm helping u ah! u make me like the bad person here
Eslyna:ik its suggestion to improve, I'm just curious thats all, not hating or amything
Your novel was on "similar novels" tab for my novel, and your pic and title got me curious and interested so I clicked lol I didnt even read it though as I noticed it only has like sixteen chapters while first review was 11months ago, so I guessed (is it dropped though?) it was dropped. I use phone app so I cant tell when chapters were published.
immortalnoob:UwU Thanks for standing up for lil ol' me. I can't believe my highkey dead novel actually has people
I publish once a month(because I have no will to do anything) but I sometimes post more if someone wants a chapter or something. I don't recommend reading my novel cause it's a mess and a half but if you do then good luck!!!
Eslyna:Your novel was on "similar novels" tab for my novel, and your pic and title got me curious and interested so I clicked lol I didnt even read it though as I noticed it only has like sixteen chapters while first review was 11months ago, so I guessed (is it dropped though?) it was dropped. I use phone app so I cant tell when chapters were published.
Eslyna:Your novel was on "similar novels" tab for my novel, and your pic and title got me curious and interested so I clicked lol I didnt even read it though as I noticed it only has like sixteen chapters while first review was 11months ago, so I guessed (is it dropped though?) it was dropped. I use phone app so I cant tell when chapters were published.
Also no offense, but I feel like u two are the same person now lol, u responded so quick, awfully suspicious (*^。^*) Im ok even if u were though, just weird on the timing
immortalnoob:UwU Thanks for standing up for lil ol' me. I can't believe my highkey dead novel actually has people
We are on discord and she told me to look at my comments btw you should add my discord(shameless plug-in) Masaya #2468
Eslyna:Also no offense, but I feel like u two are the same person now lol, u responded so quick, awfully suspicious (*^。^*) Im ok even if u were though, just weird on the timing
immortalnoob:We are on discord and she told me to look at my comments btw you should add my discord(shameless plug-in) Masaya #2468
immortalnoob:We are on discord and she told me to look at my comments btw you should add my discord(shameless plug-in) Masaya #2468
immortalnoob:Masaya is the name and the id is 2468. Just go to add friend and type that in
I'm confident that my synopsis is good but the inside who knows 😂 so don't get disappointed ok as long as the door is attractive people might open the door (even tho the inside might not be as good as the door T^T)
darkergrim:Well I got nothing to say I’m only surprised and happy to see people talking nicely not fighting like two horny rhinos Who are fighting for a woman well I just got here I will try to read your novel Mhhn🤞🏼✌🏻🤞🏼✌🏻✌🏻