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LuoYeYouLing
LuoYeYouLingLv55yrLuoYeYouLing

I'm afraid that I would forget about what happened by the time I get to the end of the story. So, I would be doing a review based on the first 10 chapters. I'd be dropping comments every now and then. The storyline is interesting and I like how protective Avery is. And how different he actually is compared to the first episode. There are some grammatical errors and missing comma. Missing capitalization of the first word. I can still understand the story but I had to pause every now and then. COMMA is important! Hope you would have fixed them in the later chapters. Also, Elmond is hilarious! I love sidekicks that has a gay vibe for their boss! I want to see more of him! :P But your synopsis is giving me a bad vibe.

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Hinder-Rella

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Thank you for the review I will need to look back on past work and update my synopsis