Review Detail of Scarlettbunny in Hinder-Rella
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Hello everyone who has been reading! Thank you so much for reading my work! I have never done anything like this before in my entire life and always dreamed I would get the courage to do so. I pushed myself to do it because of the writing contest but I honestly think I want to keep this work alive so I will do my best to upload chapets on a daily basis. đđđ I apologise for giving myself a rating but I would be happy to hear feedback.
Hinder-Rella
Scarlettbunny
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Ok I'm done reading, I think the reason as to why your not getting much views, is because something is missing from the story. Though a romance novel isn't really my thing, I can say your story is pretty ok, but somehow I really think its missing something that can define it as a separate story from the dozens of others. Sorry if this sounds like I'm lecturing seeing I'm new in this writing thing as well, but that's just my opinion. I'm not sure if your missing fluffiness or something similar... Overall just keep on writing and keep on enjoying it. Sorry again if I have offended you.
lynerparel:Ok I'm done reading, I think the reason as to why your not getting much views, is because something is missing from the story. Though a romance novel isn't really my thing, I can say your story is pretty ok, but somehow I really think its missing something that can define it as a separate story from the dozens of others. Sorry if this sounds like I'm lecturing seeing I'm new in this writing thing as well, but that's just my opinion. I'm not sure if your missing fluffiness or something similar... Overall just keep on writing and keep on enjoying it. Sorry again if I have offended you.
Based on your writing style I have novel idea that you might wanna try. How about writing a novel with the main character has a system called the evil step mother system, this system makes her level up if he completes missions that make her look like an evil step mother but in truth its the heroines that are b*tches
lynerparel:Based on your writing style I have novel idea that you might wanna try. How about writing a novel with the main character has a system called the evil step mother system, this system makes her level up if he completes missions that make her look like an evil step mother but in truth its the heroines that are b*tches
