Review Detail of Roktah in Reincarnation in Onepiece World
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not much to say about this novel, its good and i give usually rather low scores. there are only 4 chapters out but this might be one of the best novel starts in fanfiction as i have nothing to complain about. Its a system novel but the mc and the system will most likely not travel around the world killing, at the age of 2 to 8 like other novels do. The mcs cheat is one that requires him to work to become strong as he only gained training methods not some ultimate sword comprehension or smt. i'm quite eager to see him grow while training and finally breaking to his marine parents that he is going to become a pirate or maybe he will become a marine too. The most important thing for this novel is to take it one step at a time and not to hurry too much to leave for the next world. 300-500 chapters just one piece world would be awesome, not too much not too little.No need to haven an invincible chara from the start. 4 stars(a really good novel) bc no one has ever received 5 stars from me 5 stars(almost perfect novel)
Reincarnation in Onepiece World
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I have no complaint's, I'm not a fan of novels where systems give advice or seem like they are in control of MC in some way. But that's just my personal preference.
Roktah:oh yeah thats a good novel, training arc just finished
well, the reason i like this novel is because it actually makes the mc work for his power. the mc is op but not to an unreasonable degree.
Myumara:I have no complaint's, I'm not a fan of novels where systems give advice or seem like they are in control of MC in some way. But that's just my personal preference.
Hmmm, I'd disagree. Having Haki at 8 years old is pretty OP. Normally only Vice Admirals have Haki. If Luffy had Haki from the start of the series, the logutown ark with smoker, alabasta ark with crocodile, and skypea ark with Eneal would have been pretty boring if he could just fight them with Haki.
Roktah:well, the reason i like this novel is because it actually makes the mc work for his power. the mc is op but not to an unreasonable degree.
its still within the power realm of one piece, its not uncommon for as example hve 3 year old shinobi having kage strength and with 4 beyond anything this world has to offer. at the current chapter mc is 14, meaning he trained for more than 10 years. with all memories of admiral Z, and later on direct guidance from him for multiple years, i could argue that if he did'nt at least reach his current lvl he would be kinda a failure. luffy only travelled probably less than 10 years to get to the new world with haki and everything and he started out with only some basic survival training.
Myumara:Hmmm, I'd disagree. Having Haki at 8 years old is pretty OP. Normally only Vice Admirals have Haki. If Luffy had Haki from the start of the series, the logutown ark with smoker, alabasta ark with crocodile, and skypea ark with Eneal would have been pretty boring if he could just fight them with Haki.
I have to disagree completely. I agree that when a ninja is kage lvl at 4 it's strange, but him having haki when we don't even see haki till later in the grand line. But he has it now, where else can he go from there? He has already unlocked all the one piece powers so now he will have to get more and more powers from other anime getting more op really fast. Why give him every haki at 4 years old? At least we have examples of 6-year-old chunin in Naruto, but 15-year-old yonkos?
Roktah:its still within the power realm of one piece, its not uncommon for as example hve 3 year old shinobi having kage strength and with 4 beyond anything this world has to offer. at the current chapter mc is 14, meaning he trained for more than 10 years. with all memories of admiral Z, and later on direct guidance from him for multiple years, i could argue that if he did'nt at least reach his current lvl he would be kinda a failure. luffy only travelled probably less than 10 years to get to the new world with haki and everything and he started out with only some basic survival training.
And the fact he did nothing but train every day for 14 years and did almost nothing else sounds pretty unbelievable. Even Luffy had adventures as a kid with ace. I just feel like it's kinda rushed.
Roktah:its still within the power realm of one piece, its not uncommon for as example hve 3 year old shinobi having kage strength and with 4 beyond anything this world has to offer. at the current chapter mc is 14, meaning he trained for more than 10 years. with all memories of admiral Z, and later on direct guidance from him for multiple years, i could argue that if he did'nt at least reach his current lvl he would be kinda a failure. luffy only travelled probably less than 10 years to get to the new world with haki and everything and he started out with only some basic survival training.
well whats he supposed to do, his mental age is far beyond those of his age, should he go play little kid again. if he has the mental maturity to concentrate on training and set his future foundation in a world where you get killed if you are not strong enough, then thats what any rational ***** will do. now his training is over and he sets out for some actual experience. i guess he could have waited till 16 when his body has largely finished growing but its ok. another thing is that there is just nothing else to do, the entertainent options in one piece world are very limited, playing with little kids was out so lets train, and getting trained by a marine admiral is a once in a lifetime opportunity even if it takes 10 or 20 years. luffy did hunt wild animals with ace and sabo to train but to them it was an adventure, they were actual little kids playing pirate.
Myumara:And the fact he did nothing but train every day for 14 years and did almost nothing else sounds pretty unbelievable. Even Luffy had adventures as a kid with ace. I just feel like it's kinda rushed.
You said it yourself what else is there to do? I hope I'm wrong but I feel like his abilities will only get more ridiculous from here because he has all one piece has to offer. He's so strong now he has to go straight to the grand line to have a fight, but the first part of the grand line doesn't even have Haki, so he goes straight to the new world? Unless he changes the power scale to give villains in the grand line Haki?
Roktah:well whats he supposed to do, his mental age is far beyond those of his age, should he go play little kid again. if he has the mental maturity to concentrate on training and set his future foundation in a world where you get killed if you are not strong enough, then thats what any rational ***** will do. now his training is over and he sets out for some actual experience. i guess he could have waited till 16 when his body has largely finished growing but its ok. another thing is that there is just nothing else to do, the entertainent options in one piece world are very limited, playing with little kids was out so lets train, and getting trained by a marine admiral is a once in a lifetime opportunity even if it takes 10 or 20 years. luffy did hunt wild animals with ace and sabo to train but to them it was an adventure, they were actual little kids playing pirate.
well of course like many other novels he could have decided to go to see when he was 6 but decided to train instead, which is a more reasonable thing to do. with his haki he is too strong for the first half of the first part of the grandline but his swordmanship is still relatively low, so he is just not going to use his haki and only use swordmanship. while he is strong he has'nt reached the point and won't for a few years where he can act like king on the grandline, pirates and marines travel around. you might encounter a yonko in the east blue and other high lvl pirates and marines out to hunt them. the cheat in this novel gave him initially advantages and afterwards he was left to his own devices, so no missions with crazy rewards a la immortal body technique or skills and shop that sells everything. system i want food, system i want flying castle, system i want techniques, system i want wife thats a typical system novel. if you make a novel with an mc who is god lvl while everyone else is mortal then the novel can't focus on fighting for obvious reasons, no suspense. so it should focus on the adventure itself with fighting just being a part of it with a lot of slice of life elements. the fact that the mc is going to be an adventurer and not a pirate or marine makes this one stand out as its usually either of the two travelling to different islands that may have not been in the canon, adventuring, exploring, assembling his crew step by step and for once the one piece not being the goal. i'm eager to see where the author takes this novel
Myumara:You said it yourself what else is there to do? I hope I'm wrong but I feel like his abilities will only get more ridiculous from here because he has all one piece has to offer. He's so strong now he has to go straight to the grand line to have a fight, but the first part of the grand line doesn't even have Haki, so he goes straight to the new world? Unless he changes the power scale to give villains in the grand line Haki?
Roktah:well of course like many other novels he could have decided to go to see when he was 6 but decided to train instead, which is a more reasonable thing to do. with his haki he is too strong for the first half of the first part of the grandline but his swordmanship is still relatively low, so he is just not going to use his haki and only use swordmanship. while he is strong he has'nt reached the point and won't for a few years where he can act like king on the grandline, pirates and marines travel around. you might encounter a yonko in the east blue and other high lvl pirates and marines out to hunt them. the cheat in this novel gave him initially advantages and afterwards he was left to his own devices, so no missions with crazy rewards a la immortal body technique or skills and shop that sells everything. system i want food, system i want flying castle, system i want techniques, system i want wife thats a typical system novel. if you make a novel with an mc who is god lvl while everyone else is mortal then the novel can't focus on fighting for obvious reasons, no suspense. so it should focus on the adventure itself with fighting just being a part of it with a lot of slice of life elements. the fact that the mc is going to be an adventurer and not a pirate or marine makes this one stand out as its usually either of the two travelling to different islands that may have not been in the canon, adventuring, exploring, assembling his crew step by step and for once the one piece not being the goal. i'm eager to see where the author takes this novel
Well buddy, what ya think of his adventure so far? From what I've seen he's already as strong as Sanji after the time skip, being able to fly and all.
Roktah:well of course like many other novels he could have decided to go to see when he was 6 but decided to train instead, which is a more reasonable thing to do. with his haki he is too strong for the first half of the first part of the grandline but his swordmanship is still relatively low, so he is just not going to use his haki and only use swordmanship. while he is strong he has'nt reached the point and won't for a few years where he can act like king on the grandline, pirates and marines travel around. you might encounter a yonko in the east blue and other high lvl pirates and marines out to hunt them. the cheat in this novel gave him initially advantages and afterwards he was left to his own devices, so no missions with crazy rewards a la immortal body technique or skills and shop that sells everything. system i want food, system i want flying castle, system i want techniques, system i want wife thats a typical system novel. if you make a novel with an mc who is god lvl while everyone else is mortal then the novel can't focus on fighting for obvious reasons, no suspense. so it should focus on the adventure itself with fighting just being a part of it with a lot of slice of life elements. the fact that the mc is going to be an adventurer and not a pirate or marine makes this one stand out as its usually either of the two travelling to different islands that may have not been in the canon, adventuring, exploring, assembling his crew step by step and for once the one piece not being the goal. i'm eager to see where the author takes this novel
