Review Detail of sososooososooso in Chrysalis

Item: Chrysalis
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

sososooososoosoLv34yrsososooososooso

Gotta say. So far, there’s one thing has been bugging me. The writing. Sometimes letters that are supposed to be capitalized aren’t, missing periods at the end of dialogues, misused words, and more grammatical mistakes. I’m a person that always notices the little things, and it’s always the little things that ruins EVERYTHING.

Chrysalis

RinoZ

Liked by 12 people

Replies6

sososooososoosoLv3sososooososooso

Please author, proofread before you release. This is a great novel, I don’t want to be bothered every paragraph over these seemingly small things...

4yr

GodEndraLv3GodEndra

Erm, I see no spelling errors whatsoever nor do I see any complaints similar to yours even going back a year ago. Either you wanted something to complain about or you got the wrong story.

4yr

Only2GendersLv4Only2Genders

Guess the author went back and fixed the errors. His comment was 5 months ago.

GodEndra:Erm, I see no spelling errors whatsoever nor do I see any complaints similar to yours even going back a year ago. Either you wanted something to complain about or you got the wrong story.

4yr

GodEndraLv3GodEndra

I mean I've been there since the beginning(chapter 5) and I saw no errors. I think the person may have gotten the wrong story

Only2Genders:Guess the author went back and fixed the errors. His comment was 5 months ago.

4yr

Yeetus_Deletus_Lv4Yeetus_Deletus_

You forgot the use of an exclamation point to emphasize your emotions.

4yr

UltimumEquesLv3UltimumEques

Really? There may be a few spelling and syntax errors I hadn't noticed, but the overall sentence structure & word use are much better than 99% of everything else on this site. This is about as good as you can expect from a non-published work.

3yr