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nemery11
nemery11Lv66yr
2018-08-25 02:21

Why are there story in first person more and more!!????!?!!!???!!?!!??!!??!!???????????????????????!!!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!????????? ¿!!??????!!??!! ¡??

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CallMeSoraka
CallMeSorakaLv4

Why not? There’s more than one way to write.

nemery11
nemery11Lv6

Well, i wrote that review long time ago. Since then i have read a lot. Anyway, not every novel is good with that writing type because if we see just the mc perspective we are not seeing the whole picture (that why didn't like it first, but i am good i have read few good one)

CallMeSoraka:Why not? There’s more than one way to write.
AlienTurkey9958
AlienTurkey9958Lv11

That's is the appeal to first person writing, that you get to see the mc's perspective on the world and unfolding story.

nemery11:Well, i wrote that review long time ago. Since then i have read a lot. Anyway, not every novel is good with that writing type because if we see just the mc perspective we are not seeing the whole picture (that why didn't like it first, but i am good i have read few good one)
Zoroastra
ZoroastraLv10

Plus you get to listen to the MCs insane ranting, what's not to love?

Blodgram
BlodgramLv5

Hahaha woo** now I feel bad, these are my favorite ones as I can better feel involved in the story rather than being a passive observer. And that way you can also be surprised by plot twists etc as with 3rd person you often already know about it :p

Piggynator_Cool
Piggynator_CoolLv2

I personally prefer first person because any other form of writing leaves me detached from the main character like, how they think/ contemplate an issue

nemery11
nemery11Lv6

i wrote this 2 years ago, and i still by my words. the reason is there are very few good ones, and the rest is just turn like inner monologue!. anyway, the first person style needs a competence writer otherwise it makes very unpleasant reading experience.

Piggynator_Cool:I personally prefer first person because any other form of writing leaves me detached from the main character like, how they think/ contemplate an issue
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reylt
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qahl
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