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Adam
AdamLv56yr
2018-08-20 06:47

It was an overall ok novel from what i read, i just got annoyed at how everything he seemed to do seemed to force an advancement in the overall plot, most things shouldn't effect everyone else, he makes loads of really stupid decisions which he doesn't seem to lean from which annoys me, and half of each chapter just seems to be him bitching and complaining about one thing or another, i skipped in 5 chapters hoping it would improve, but it seemed he still complains so i'm dropping the book

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ArcaneOverlord
ArcaneOverlordLv5

He's only human afterall. and humans are barely makes the right choice.

Adam
AdamLv5

he doesn't have to make the right choice, but 99% of the time, the things we do don't set off a massive chain reaction that changes our entire circumstances which seemed to happen to him all the time

ArcaneOverlord:He's only human afterall. and humans are barely makes the right choice.
Adam
AdamLv5

most humans also don't sit there for half our day complaining about **** we cant control or have already, that's called depression, we also learn from our mistakes, we don't punch a brick wall, recover from the broken hand and go, hey i wana punch that brick wall

ArcaneOverlord:He's only human afterall. and humans are barely makes the right choice.
Adam
AdamLv5

he's also....... not human........... your only argument was invalid

ArcaneOverlord:He's only human afterall. and humans are barely makes the right choice.
GreyMalken
GreyMalkenLv14

Have you LOOKED at social media? Complaining is like an international sport/hobby for humanity, thank you for participating!

Adam:most humans also don't sit there for half our day complaining about **** we cant control or have already, that's called depression, we also learn from our mistakes, we don't punch a brick wall, recover from the broken hand and go, hey i wana punch that brick wall
Adam
AdamLv5

Just cause we do it another doesn't mean while we could die at any time were gonna sit there *****ing instead of trying to get out of the situation, also the fact that he hasn't died since he bitches during fights astounded me, In a fight to the death 1 small slip could kill you, and it never seemed to effect him

GreyMalken:Have you LOOKED at social media? Complaining is like an international sport/hobby for humanity, thank you for participating!
GreyMalken
GreyMalkenLv14

1) he's a reincarnated human 2) the fact that you've made this many replies complaining only further bolsters the evidence of humanities nigh endless capacity to complain about anything. Of the many fantastic elements presented in stories, a person's capacity to find something to complain about in any situation, under any circumstances, has yet to challenge my suspension of disbelief.

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Adam
AdamLv5

Many fantastic elements such as.....??? Also your talking as if I gave the book 2 stars, the book 100% doesn't deserve 5 stars because that **** is reserved for the top of the line, faultless books of there genre, and for me, 4 stars is top 10% of books which this isnt so 3.5 is fair, and why the hell are you *****ing about constructive criticism as if the book is perfect, I bet you gave it 4.5 or 5 like loads of other people give out to "ok" books on this site

GreyMalken:1) he's a reincarnated human 2) the fact that you've made this many replies complaining only further bolsters the evidence of humanities nigh endless capacity to complain about anything. Of the many fantastic elements presented in stories, a person's capacity to find something to complain about in any situation, under any circumstances, has yet to challenge my suspension of disbelief.
DausX
DausXLv6

Complains about too much complaining in the novel... just saying... The LOGIC is strong with this one.

Randomizer
RandomizerLv5

It's a legit complaint though, a story where nearly half the written words consists of the MC constantly complaining, whining and *****ing about stuff? it's boring to read.

Adam
AdamLv5

Finally, someone who isn't *****ing about constructive criticism cause they like the book, and any book they like is 5/5

Randomizer:It's a legit complaint though, a story where nearly half the written words consists of the MC constantly complaining, whining and *****ing about stuff? it's boring to read.
CheekiBreeki
CheekiBreekiLv11

Your second point is a fallacy, don’t act childish.

GreyMalken:1) he's a reincarnated human 2) the fact that you've made this many replies complaining only further bolsters the evidence of humanities nigh endless capacity to complain about anything. Of the many fantastic elements presented in stories, a person's capacity to find something to complain about in any situation, under any circumstances, has yet to challenge my suspension of disbelief.
CheekiBreeki
CheekiBreekiLv11

Honestly your completely correct can’t believe these proms are yelling at you in the comments. The book is far from perfect, the Mc has little to no natural personality development and the plot is forced in a crude way.

markraider
markraiderLv3

yes

WolfFoxGod
WolfFoxGodLv3

It gets better after around C60

Adam
AdamLv5

I shouldn't have to read 60 chapters for it to start to get better, now, if you told me by chapter 120, there was crazy character development, interesting, original storylines with plot twists I'd never see coming, then I'd stick out the **** bits, but I can get "alright" anywhere on this sight, it's filled with average books, so there's no need for me to deal with the negatives to get more of the same. I appreciate knowing that it does get better though.

WolfFoxGod:It gets better after around C60
Adam
AdamLv5

I shouldn't have to read 60 chapters for it to start to get better, now, if you told me by chapter 120, there was crazy character development, interesting, original storylines with plot twists I'd never see coming, then I'd stick out the **** bits, but I can get "alright" anywhere on this sight, it's filled with average books, so there's no need for me to deal with the negatives to get more of the same. I appreciate knowing that it does get better though.

WolfFoxGod:It gets better after around C60
Audio_Coon
Audio_CoonLv3

primero que nada, comento porque me sorprendio la cantidad de estrellas que tenia y luego el comentario y no busco que cambies de opinion solo lo hago para dar un punto de vista. Diria que si bien puede ser molesto para algunos el que se queje para otros como por ejemplo yo tiene logica, pues le da algo de humor aunque no sea porque quiera darle humor y permite relacionarse con el protagonista, porque esta sufriendo y el sufrir es algo comun que todos vivimos y es facil relacionarse con el sentimiento brindando una facilidad para congeniar con el protagonista mas facilmente. Segundo el libro no sera el mejor eso es evidente y ciertamente el personaje no parece tener un crecimiento a lo largo de la historia, pero tambien hay que apreciar el hecho de que el no vivio exactamente como la mayoria si no que sufrio y pues mas bien es demasiado optimist, no se como piense el autor mejorar al protagonista siendo el tan optimista. terc

Audio_Coon
Audio_CoonLv3

seper cccontinuo, tambien te apoyo cuando dices que el protagonista se mete en demasiados problemas muy facilmente y puedo decir que es hasta facil preveerlos porque ocurre a cada rato, pero esta en una mazmorra y no una cualquiera si no de paso una en la que hay razas inteligentes con sectas con objetivos que parecen alinear los monstruos como futuros dioses y cosas por el estilo lo cual es facil preveer que tampoco es como que si los evitara intencionalmente no los fuera a encontrar, ese mundo parece estar mas conectado de lo que podriamos imaginar para la epoca en la que aparenta concebirse

Audio_Coon:primero que nada, comento porque me sorprendio la cantidad de estrellas que tenia y luego el comentario y no busco que cambies de opinion solo lo hago para dar un punto de vista. Diria que si bien puede ser molesto para algunos el que se queje para otros como por ejemplo yo tiene logica, pues le da algo de humor aunque no sea porque quiera darle humor y permite relacionarse con el protagonista, porque esta sufriendo y el sufrir es algo comun que todos vivimos y es facil relacionarse con el sentimiento brindando una facilidad para congeniar con el protagonista mas facilmente. Segundo el libro no sera el mejor eso es evidente y ciertamente el personaje no parece tener un crecimiento a lo largo de la historia, pero tambien hay que apreciar el hecho de que el no vivio exactamente como la mayoria si no que sufrio y pues mas bien es demasiado optimist, no se como piense el autor mejorar al protagonista siendo el tan optimista. terc
Audio_Coon
Audio_CoonLv3

perdon por el little spoiler

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