Item: Elemental Nations: Oni of the Whirpool
Rating: 4.6
Author: _Crystal_

_Crystal_Lv136yr

2018-07-30 09:59

I really like this,for the first time Naruto became a 'human' that know what hate taste like.Its almost unreal how can he has no negative feeling.I can't wait to see him when he is strong enough and hlget his sweet revenge.Konaha deserve to perish from the land of fire.He suffer too much beside its not like in this fan fiction there are anybody that treat him normally like in the original one,so honestly speaking he has nobody that he must protect in this damn village,well except for cat of cause if only she didn't die though..... Good work and please keep it up....

Elemental Nations: Oni of the Whirpool

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