Review Detail of Darkfire555 in FeralHeart

This story is decent in what it says, but has little strong points. The sexual portions are well written that at least is good. On the other hand the other suffers from a disjointed story which after 36 chapters I can assuredly say. I feel absolutely 0 attachment to any character given a hodge podge of names with boss Steven and whoever the hell the other guys are. There’s too many names and character switch’s to keep up with. Giving the reader too many characters at once with a distinct lack of personality traits is bad character building. TLDR Too many characters and character swaps makes the attachment and immersion in the world weak.