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XiaoHuaHua
XiaoHuaHuaLv146yr
2018-07-23 09:51

It is the first chapter only so this review is subject to change upon more information and reading materials. First of all, the MC- his life was basically what I would call Unlucky. However, he is also what I would call Lucky too because he has a grandma who loved him really much. There are other people(MC or Not) out there that had a worse life- and I mean it. Anyway, now that Jack[MC] had met a potential first friend, what will happen next? The cliffhanging wasn't really well thoughted out because it wasn't really exciting but well- this is also making me curious about what's going to happen next.

Hanami

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Vyte
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I'll have you know I used to be diagnosed with chronic Ligma, Everyday I would hear from everyone about how I would not have left to live. One day, an old junky grabbed me as I was walking past a suspicious alley and yelled at me "YOU WANT SUM' DRUGS KID?" Being diagnosed with ligma, I of course said, "No you scary sir, I have Ligma, I cannot do drugs." The Homeless looking junky looked downcast after I said that, and said "Ah, im sorry mate, That's horrible." His eyes lit up as he was talking though as he said "I have good news for yeh', Go look up the storeh 'Hanami' by the Author Jai, Something good may happen to you" As soon as I got home, I had the gut instinct to heed his advice and look up this novel. Reading the first chapter blessed me with tears as I felt the most complete i ever have in my life. To this day, My chronic Ligma seemed to have regressed. The doctors say its a miracle. But I know. Hanami cured me.

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They say beautiful things happen at 4 in the morning. I guess its true. What a nice story created at 4 in the morning by some tired and drunk dude.😂

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Skalla
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This author is known mostly for his incredible BL work, but I guess he is moving past his boundaries and doing traditional romance too. I don't know where this is going to go so far, but if his past dabbling with BL is of any indication, this is sure to be a hit.

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Miya
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First supporter of Jai and this novel. Beautiful work, Jai :v: can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Weiqing
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Seems decent at a first glance. Not much plot added within the first chapter so review is subject to change. It'll be an interesting change if done well, hope to see that from jai.

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koout
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I really love the development of this romance! Although it is a little slow, there are so many details in almost every aspect of the chapters. Makes me feel like as if I know these characters in real life! Thumbs Up!

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Modsan
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The quality is good but the characters aren't that fleshed out yet and seems kinda cliche, but it is only at 8 ch so I look forward to the rest. And I do hope you finish it Jai!!!

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