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Lun_Kitrane
Lun_KitraneLv146yr
2018-08-10 19:10

Complete and utter wish fulfillment. Also has pretty bad grammar compared to his other two stories. Definitely need an editor buddy. Still gonna read all 3 but just saying. Also this falls somewhere between his bleach and fairy tail stories in lewdness levels. But yea lotta OP mc with huge IQ and lie detector abilities, feels a bit rushed, definitely not a very deep story. Still a nice read if you want to turn your brain off during though.

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Seion
SeionAuthor

they only draw back is that it's not mine a friend wrote this and i'm posting it under my name.... as for how far it will go i have no idea

BSGxOziro
BSGxOziroLv13

As a friend you should help him with the grammar a tad bit less caps in such a random order don’t write like you text the usual of not having the worst grammar to make it bareable

Seion:they only draw back is that it's not mine a friend wrote this and i'm posting it under my name.... as for how far it will go i have no idea
Seion
SeionAuthor

Man that's like rewriting everything and i don't have time for that...

BSGxOziro:As a friend you should help him with the grammar a tad bit less caps in such a random order don’t write like you text the usual of not having the worst grammar to make it bareable
BSGxOziro
BSGxOziroLv13

Lol IK I But on a serious note the think the story takes a different spin on summon novels but he’s trying be too different and it can seem like a mess with the dialogue

Seion:Man that's like rewriting everything and i don't have time for that...
newthings
newthingsLv6

multiple MC?

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