Review Detail of Yukinero in The Origin System (TSOC)

Item: The Origin System (TSOC)
Rating: 5

Review detail

YukineroLv55yrYukinero

This story is ver interesting but unfortunately the story ha stop updating. If someone picks the story up, it could be potentially become very popular.

The Origin System (TSOC)

WebnovelLife

Liked it!

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WebnovelLifeAuthorWebnovelLife

The author here : I was thinking of starting it again so please give me idea on what you expect from this in the future

5yr

YukineroLv5Yukinero

You could start by introducing more characters and some little situation where the mc faces near death experiences and changes personality (lots of people like it when the mc is not ***** and easy to mess with.)

WebnovelLife:The author here : I was thinking of starting it again so please give me idea on what you expect from this in the future

5yr

YukineroLv5Yukinero

Also u could add a bit of foreshadowing.(everyone loves that too)

WebnovelLife:The author here : I was thinking of starting it again so please give me idea on what you expect from this in the future

5yr