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WanderingCrow
WanderingCrowLv135yr
2019-01-14 00:26

I’ve been on Webnovel for years. This is my second time ever to write a review. I’ll just get to the point, this novel deserves the five stars rating. Unlike most novels the romance starts right away without the main protagonists waiting hundreds of chapters to realize that they “possibly” like the other protagonist. It is like a breath of fresh air. Although it’s part of the stereotypical CEO Genre, it stands on its own and is quite different from other novels whether they are original or translated. The female lead isn’t dense or pointlessly stupid and hopeless. She doesn’t wallow in self pity or wait for the male lead to come save her. Their interactions are shameless and funny, in my opinion they act like most people in real life would. The male lead is interesting as well. I’ll leave it at that, you gotta read about him to understand how glorious he really is. Constructive Criticism: ( This is not meant to insult the author. This story is currently my favorite one on Webnovel.) Although I give the novel five stars. There is one thing I noticed that definitely needs improvement. Whenever I read chapters, I notice multiple times that words are misspelled. Or there will be sentence structure that is incorrect. It’s a consistent problem. If it is one or two typos or “weird” sentence structure I wouldn’t mind. I would actually prefer a slower release rate if these can be fixed. But then again I am fanatical about grammar and such. It’s a habit of mine I guess. All in all I would say that this novel is worth five stars even with the grammatical errors I notice. The story would benefit from a proofreader and editor. However that is the authors choice. Personally I love the novel enough to overlook the mistakes I notice. Summary: Give this story a chance. It became my favorite novel on Webnovel. I think it is better than the translated ones.

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Pjevans
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Me too I love how she jumps right into the storyline.

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I mean yr

Angelica_Meneque
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😍😍😍

chenqing
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Independent FL r my types.. 😉

naaz1131
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I am satisfied with your opnion

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So true

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Yes I agree

TwistedTsunami
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I will check out this novel based on your review. I don’t normally like female protagonists cn novels bc the male leads tend to be wimpy

COOKIE
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Yes

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Me too

Trichilla_Kay
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I love everything about this story

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Could have said it better👏🏽💕

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Your review made me want to read it😉😊

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Sorahana
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I have been reading this novel for months since there was only a few chapters back then, but I'm mostly a silent reader (only occasionally give comments) and after 600 chapters, I decided that it's time to give a review. From the long time I decided to follow this novel, I think it's clear that I really love this novel... wait, let me rephrase it. I'm loving this novel so much that I continued to follow it until the newest chapter. 💙 This novel mainly tells about Lu Xinyi and Shen Yi. Their relationships started off pretty quick, yet it was fairly realistic. At the same time, their interaction was humorous, funny, and at the same time, very interesting. However, this novel is not one where the FL can't do anything without the ML. She had her own charms and obviously, she's very mischievous too (Which is clearly stated in the title too 😂). The way she behaved would surely make one laugh a lot. I have a good share of laugh over the time I spend reading this novel. The most important thing in this novel is not just about the couple's relationship, it's FOOD. Yes, there are so many foods here that one will definitely droll at the description. (Though, listening- I mean, reading the way it was made, I'm 100% sure that I won't be able to make it irl. I'll just be a good girl and read the delicious food served while snacking 😂) Lu Xinyi is really a good chef and the way The author has been telling how she cooked, the struggle she faced and also the reason why she picked the dishes, all were very compelling and interesting. I'm not a good chef, so can't say much about it, but I know that I drooled over the food (several times) *cough* Let's move on before I reveal more of my embarrassing moments when I read this novel 😂 (mostly just drooling, though, eh- *cough* move on) Aside from cooking, there are a lot of good face slap too. Lu Xinyi has a lot of enemies, especially her families (I really wish to skin them alive when I read what they did, especially to her cousin... I won't go into detail as it'll be spoiler, but believe me that the description alone would make you wish to enter the book and slice their necks). Just like what Lu Xinyi said, if only she wasn't a young miss from this backstabbing family, she would have danced around and throw a party to celebrate. Anyway, I have talked a bit too much... O.o I'm not even sure anyone will read since it's really... long haha. Overall, it's a good and enjoyable read. Anjee (I hope you don't mind me shortening your name, Author) is really a good author who can catch the reader's attention. I love this novel very much and wish to see it to the end. P.S: for those wondering why the score is not a perfect one (If they decided to read this long review), I docked one star from the stability of updates because there's a period of time when the updates is not stable due to the author's health :( (Wishing you good health always, Author, especially during this time when covid-19 is wrecking the world and make a lot of people sick) Thank you very much for the lovely novel 💙. With love from one of your silent readers, Sorahana 😊

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