Review Detail of kouhaipandere in Wholly Undead

While Wholly Undead is not the first title with the transmigration genre, it is one that takes an interesting and, within the fiction of the story, believeable approach. The main character, Jack, is both entertaining and relateable, with his need to entertain himself when bored and his selfishness when it comes to that which he cares for. Each of the characters around Jack his closest friends, consorts, pet, and tool; are an absolute delight to get to know. They give our view of the world more diversity and allow the author, Voidmirage, plenty of opportunities to expand the world which holds Daegoth. I personally find the pacing of the story to be quite nice, not so fast that I loose track of what's going on nor quite so slow that I grow frustrated and disinterested. While there are grammatical and vocabulary errors they are never so bad that the reader is unable to figure out what the author was trying to relate, portay, or explain. Furthermore, the author shows care to their readers and story by going back and correcting mistakes that are pointed out in the comments section by readers. Though we, the readers, do not yet know every nook and cranny of the world, we are slowly coming to understand the world at a very comfortable pace. Overall, I quite enjoy the schemes of our villainous God-King, and I look forward to the future of this story, as well as, all future stories of Voidmirage. To the author, I quite like your inner voice, and your style. Thank you.