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MARKZ137
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If you like Overlord, you are going to like this as it is very similar. MC is once again your average unappreciated nerd who becomes big badass boss in a fantasy world. But there are several elements which make it different: - MC is clever and he himself is not so much powerful (it is his knowledge which makes him into a powerhouse). - The world is very original and interesting (underground world where undeads are people and LIVE like people). - Characters offten show some standard tropes, but these are executed in a good way. And yes, villains are people too and do not act without reason. - Story is mostly logical, but unpredictable and plot twists have been detected. And yes, what seems plain at first may later appear to be much deeper. It also contains some really emotional scenes. As for elements, story mainly focuses on undead (human) relations. There is some politics, battles and cultivation, but these are secondary. It contains unexpectedly nice romance, moderately funny humor, popcultural references, some common sense breaking and lots of undeads. The only thing I would reproach is that the story would deserve an editor. I often find some little mistakes here and there and dear author, "your" is not equal to "you're". Still, really good quality for a new writer.

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UrAverageSkeleton
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This coment alone sold me

MARKZ137
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Currently basically on hiatus. Also story got quite a different feel since I made the last comment. It's trying to be funnier, is less smart, there are mythos in... funny way? Also, there is too much waifu stuff going on. Personally, I would give it just 4/5 right now. But that said, last chapter (posted after like months) quite sold me.

UrAverageSkeleton:This coment alone sold me
UrAverageSkeleton
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noted

MARKZ137:Currently basically on hiatus. Also story got quite a different feel since I made the last comment. It's trying to be funnier, is less smart, there are mythos in... funny way? Also, there is too much waifu stuff going on. Personally, I would give it just 4/5 right now. But that said, last chapter (posted after like months) quite sold me.