Author here. Yes, I am shamelessly going to give my story 5 stars across the board. If I don't like the story, then who will?! I'll be posting new chapters on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays. If I have any extra chapters I write, I will ghost post them on the weekends. Let us dive into the story of Wholly undead, and see how our Main character Jack will develop the Holy Kingdom of Deagoth. Please comment, rate, and throw power stones at the story, if you like. Thank you.
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LIKEVoidmirage here! Hey-oh! Yes, he does get a harem, and yes he is a skeleton. The undead of the underworld have devised a way to have pleasure and later kids, where we learn later in the story how that works. The MC really really wanted to know that for a while, as *spoiler alert* he's a bit of a perv. On another note: These undead live like people for the most part. It's very interesting, in my humble opinion!
Im really having fun reading this at first. I thought its very interesting but when the harem inserts i felt like my soul just departed from my body (as i myself is not a fan of harem). But then being optimistic i convinced myself that maybe it will be just in a short while (like a filler), so here i am checking the reviews and then what i saw is your reply, admitting that there really is harem in this novel. Anyways im still glad that i stumbled upon this one, i have fun even though its just in a short time (coz i don't think i can continue reading this knowing there is harem). Thank you respectable author for you hard work. Keep up the good work!!! FIGHTING!!! and bye (dropped).
I understand that certain genres are not for everyone, but I am extremely glad that tried the novel, even enjoying certain parts. The harem aspect of the novel is a large theme and will continue to have a major impact on the remainder of the novel. So, I agree dropping it is a good idea, even if I am the author. I sincerely appreciate the feedback and honesty here, without over the top antics. Perhaps I will be lucky to have you as a fan with my next novel when I am finished with Wholly Undead. Again, thank you for reading, and trying the novel!
Genard:Im really having fun reading this at first. I thought its very interesting but when the harem inserts i felt like my soul just departed from my body (as i myself is not a fan of harem). But then being optimistic i convinced myself that maybe it will be just in a short while (like a filler), so here i am checking the reviews and then what i saw is your reply, admitting that there really is harem in this novel. Anyways im still glad that i stumbled upon this one, i have fun even though its just in a short time (coz i don't think i can continue reading this knowing there is harem). Thank you respectable author for you hard work. Keep up the good work!!! FIGHTING!!! and bye (dropped).