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I read up until chapter twelve. The plot is really interesting so far. Its cliche( reincarnated to her past) but at the same time original in terms of not wanting revenge, power, and etc., which sets your story apart from others. I like how you transition between different point of views smoothly. I like how calm and rational the main character is. Grammar wise its fine. I can't wait for another chapter. Cheers!