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Review Detail of Skalla in Honey, Your Mom is now a System Goddess

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Exceptional base quality. Grammar and sentence structure are both on point, leaving readability without a hitch. That meets a standard considerably higher than a good chunk of original works here in my opinion. The premise mixes both the novel and the expected with a mother operating as a system goddess, which lends itself well to separating from the regular fold of system-based stories. In a story like this, the main character is what truly has to stand out as she embodies everything that makes the story unique (being a mother placed as a system goddess). Towards that end, the author has done a respectable job with the first chapter, humanizing her and fleshing out her background. I do still think it could have been spread out over multiple chapters to really build up who she was, but I also understand that getting to the meat of the story (seeing the MC operating as a goddess) is also important. All in all, a promising start so far. Looking forward to new updates.

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