Review Detail of Blue1ao in A God's Apocalyptic Entertainment
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The beginning first 3-5 chapters in my opinion was a little over the top and hard to read in my opinion but I'm getting tired of that type of thing in stories so some people might like it...the rest of the story is amazing I really love what you're doing and I know it's hard showing trama and the healing process but I have to say you're doing an amazing job and to keep up the good work
A God's Apocalyptic Entertainment
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Hello and thanks for reading! When I was first writing the first 3-5 chapters I was a complete novice, this is really my first book that I ever truly had to put time into and released online. I have gone back and edited those chapters, but the story has definitely evolved since then. Even i can tell that the way i write has changed since those first ones. I went more detailed in them and realistic, while at this point in the story (Ch.160) I have gone more fantasy/game/ and realistic approach in writing. About trauma, I'm glad you liked it, those were some of the hardest chapters to write and still sometimes i think back wondering if i got them just right. Once again Thanks for Reading :) !