Very good novel. Thoughtful world and system. Not badly written images of MC. History slowed down a bit after the city. But it seemed to start to grow again. Of the minus the lengthy and boring chapters about the world of the "immortal"(players).
Zevren
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LIKEHello and thanks for reading :) I thought the chapters about the world of "immortals" (Players) was a nice side story when i started writing them and i do still like writing them. But yes it does feel like filler a lot more and probably won't do as much of them as i was planning, sticking more with the MC in the future. Thanks for the review and Reading again :)!