character is an emotional being CHECK! character is not a god CHECK! character is well balanced CHECK! characters act like whats happening to them is real CHECK! author takes notes/is humble CHECK!edge of your seat story CHECK! over all great story DOUBLE CHECK!
Zevren
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LIKEHello and thanks for reading. Thank you for the wonderful review and i hope I can keep all of what you have said up. Some times i think of certain plot threads in the future, but have trouble actually getting to them, which can affect some of what you have mentioned. Hopefully i can keep the story so it makes sense. Thanks for reading Again :)
Dude all of us are waiting for you and sure a ‘few’ of us are impatient but I’m sure most of them are willing to wade through a couple of filler chapters so you can get to your plot threads.
Zevren:Hello and thanks for reading. Thank you for the wonderful review and i hope I can keep all of what you have said up. Some times i think of certain plot threads in the future, but have trouble actually getting to them, which can affect some of what you have mentioned. Hopefully i can keep the story so it makes sense. Thanks for reading Again :)