I thoroughly enjoy it. I understand that the author is a new author, therefore definitely there are rooms for improvement. Some aspects to improve is to explain processes in a short,concise and understanding manner. Second, a spellcheck once in a while wouldn’t harm.
Zevren
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LIKEThank you for reading first off. Yes i am a new author and would like to thank you for the review. I have been thinking about the concise info drops a lot and agree that there are area for improvement. Especially like the first 2-4 chapters, i have seriously thought hard about rewriting them and trying to improve that aspect as i think people may find it hard to start the novel with such an info dump. All spell checking and editing is done by myself so i know there are quite a few mistakes. also there differences between my word spell check and web novel spell check, which is annoying. Once again thanks for the input.