Review Detail of Rhuz in A God's Apocalyptic Entertainment

Item: A God's Apocalyptic Entertainment
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

RhuzLv125yrRhuz

A good story written in a good english.You put a good foundation for the characters and the world background.You only need to develop it however you like.The story so far is developing at a good pace(not fast not slow).Continue like that I will be voting for your novel :) (Sorry for any mistakes in my review.English is not my first language).

A God's Apocalyptic Entertainment

Zevren

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ZevrenAuthorZevren

Thank you for reading and love to see your comments each chapter. Your English is good from the looks of it. Wasn't sure if i was going to slow, so now i'm reassured.

5yr

ledskiLv13ledski

Man, the english is definetely not good. It's passable at best. You should probably find an editor, since you have a nice plot going on here. It would be a shame to ditch a good novel just because of the english.

5yr