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2018-08-01 03:37

I should start rating my own stuff lol. I'm not going to mince words. This story has a lot of tropes, underdeveloped characters, and is your typical ishitkai. Something of a blend of the reincarnation and the straight transmigration flavors. I will try to work on fleshing out every character more beyond the cookie-cutter formations, but that takes time and I'd rather just get chapters out for the foreseeable future. No, the main character will not integrate seamlessly into the world. That isn't my intention, but I'm sorry if I'm a terrible writer and made her transition too seamless :/

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