Review Detail of PeacefulUser in Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS)

This is a very good story, extremely different from most of the clichés on this site. Honestly I do not understand why she is in such a low position. It does have a system, but it is not overpowering senseless. It has a very good launch rate, stability and excellent writing quality. Errors of writing happen a lot in the first few chapters, but then they go down until they become imperceptible. It may be that you consider some things at the beginning of the story to be meaningless, but everything has a later explanation, even things that you thought were the author's inability. The interactions and development between the characters is incredible and I feel being watching a conversation between real people, the decisions they make try to be rational but you can feel the thrill that drove them to it. The emergence of superpowers does not seem forced. The world fund seems a bit confusing in the first few chapters, but it's because the characters themselves do not know what's going on, why would we know? And in some chapters we have a much clearer picture! If it were to become premium I would continue reading without any problem. I'm pretty realistic in my reviews, this story for myself that is not a 5 is at least a 4.7, and I totally recommend taking a chance and reading. Earlier negative reviews basically read little and judged before the author began to explain things.