This is a very good story, extremely different from most of the clichés on this site. Honestly I do not understand why she is in such a low position. It does have a system, but it is not overpowering senseless. It has a very good launch rate, stability and excellent writing quality. Errors of writing happen a lot in the first few chapters, but then they go down until they become imperceptible. It may be that you consider some things at the beginning of the story to be meaningless, but everything has a later explanation, even things that you thought were the author's inability. The interactions and development between the characters is incredible and I feel being watching a conversation between real people, the decisions they make try to be rational but you can feel the thrill that drove them to it. The emergence of superpowers does not seem forced. The world fund seems a bit confusing in the first few chapters, but it's because the characters themselves do not know what's going on, why would we know? And in some chapters we have a much clearer picture! If it were to become premium I would continue reading without any problem. I'm pretty realistic in my reviews, this story for myself that is not a 5 is at least a 4.7, and I totally recommend taking a chance and reading. Earlier negative reviews basically read little and judged before the author began to explain things.

Seems like an interesting story however the grammar is pretty much crap. It's better than most but still not within an acceptable level for a writer, so the story needs some major editing. There is a lot of unnecessary information without some of the necessary world building.

Couldn't go past 3 chapters. If later this story becomes good, I would not know. But so far... Too many characters, all of them feel the same, except for cat. Bad writing skill, it reads like a child is playing with dolls and keeps narrating which doll does what. The characters don't interact like real people would, author completely fails to depict any emotional reaction vividly, with gripping *******. For example, the group encounters bizarre, science-defying phenomenon - a telepathic talking cat - and what they discuss a literal minute later? Sleeping arrangements, who is going to sleep in which bed. Wow, such realistic reactions.

The story is above average and is fairly interesting, but the grammar in some situations is god awful. Its like the author never bothers to proof read. Get an editor to fix all the typos and grammar, and this review will rise to 4 stars at the least

Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................... But Can Speed Up The Development A Litte Faster....... .............................................. .............................. ................... ............... .....

This story has great potential so far has great story. At this point I am not able to fully judge because of lack of chapters. But its quality is better than most of the originals I have seen

I love this novel !!! The only bad thing is that the entire novel isn't in Dante's POV

This is a great gamer style story. I like how Spencer isn't completely relying on his system like most of the other gamer characters. He also values his companions instead of seeing they as tools and resources. I will continue to read this novel until it finishes.

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