I love the story... It gives you a sense of action/thrill on how the story would progress, though it is in its beginning stage, it is very well written, no obvious mistakes or errors. PROS 1. The author has a good sense on how the story should go .... It's only 9 chapters but had already the feels of a great storyline. I like how she introduces characters subtly, like her brother, sister, (ex)-fiancee, rival/friend?, mysterious character (possibly the ML?). 2. I love the female lead, she was kind of a stupid/easily manipulated person(?) accrdg. to her previous definition because of this, she was used and killed by her sister in the end. Like any FL, she transformed to a lot to a more mature and determined person BUT unlike other FL, she was not an OP character, except for her face and memories of her previous life, she is basically like anyone who wants to use her skills/talents to move forward (rather than relying to her background like her previous self). CONS 1. Too little chapter as of now (currently 9 chaps) 2. needs daily chapters final evaluation: I'm gonna support this story and give it a big thumbs up. And hope people would help by reviewing it so other readers would take note of this story!
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