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zd4zaasLv13yr
2021-06-08 11:35

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Rebirth of the Heavenly General

REMOK
2.8
11 Chs

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zd4zaa
zd4zaaLv1

Hi! I'm still waiting for you reply.

3yr
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REMOK
REMOKAuthor

Greetings my reader, the author here. Just like many authors who reviewed their own work, i shall also do the same. And for those of you, since i am the author, i shall be biased and give my story a five star rating. Onto the story and as it is kind of a spoiler, read at your very own discretion. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The MC, General Yang will be reborn. As he is a more than a thousand years old, meaning he is wise plus he is a General so his is also intelligent and cunning and what not a general possesses. Even though i am just a teenager, i will try my best to show a wise character doing wise things... Mc wont be hot headed and simply kill any offenders, naw dawg. Death is an easy way out. What i like is making people's lives miserable and that is what the mc is going to do, making their life miserable. They offenders would seem happy now but it will only be a fleeting moment. And as for those who think that cutting the weeds from the roots, my ideology is "if i kicked your ass once, i can always kick it again" One last thing, the mc, even though is an immortal will have a golden finger and if you think that it will make him toooooo op, think again, after reading a few chapters. That brings me to another thing, and this is the last thing, mc will be op cuz it is really frustrating for reincarnated peeps to be weak and have no pair of balls. I really hate that so the mc will be op and not op in a sense that he will beat and solve everything with fist. When there is a need of fist, it will be used and where there isnt, it wont be. I am just giving a few points about my novel as a heads up for my future readers. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

6yr

Aids
AidsLv5

Story is average so far, some misspellings here and there but nothing to noteworthy. I'll wait for the cultivation part since that is usually what determines the quality of such a novel, hopefully it's interesting.

6yr
Akiedkhn
AkiedkhnLv2

Same rebirth crap,not gonna read it ******************************************************************************************************"*****"****""*****************

6yr
Alex_Lucifer
Alex_LuciferLv1

BBB..................... ............................. ..........................................,.................................................ad

6yr
Lilyeddy
LilyeddyLv5

I like strong mc and what made me interested is our mc is giving chance for rebirth after he sacrificed his life in heaven realm. Then the next arc makes me want to read more how will he facing his new life as royal family with full of scheme especially that concubine and lastly I want to know how general will falling in love with female lead aka lady in armor 馃樁

6yr
Kaede1999
Kaede1999Lv11

good.............................................................................................................................................................................................................

6yr
TyoQ
TyoQLv5

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6yr
MKLy
MKLyLv2

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6yr
MKLy
MKLyLv2

I will change my review when the story really begins but for now many elements in the novel have been derived from other novels.......................................

6yr
Dragohen
DragohenLv2

The MC reborn-same as other novels The MC got special eye-same as some translated novels The MC got betrayed-same as most of the popular novels

6yr
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