Review Detail of Roktah in Leading system

at first glance it look like a good novel with lots of potential. But this novel is very shallow and the characters have no life in them. everything comes too easy. first system gift: 10000000000 sys points. first guy he recruits gets everything for free, he asks no question on how there is a gravity chamber on earth or the time dilation training chamber or the teleport bracelet with storage space, its treated like the most ordinary stuff in the world, no surprise no emotion. i would go crazy about any one of those things. Romance? how to describe it: see--> like-->wifey during the beginning of the date. the concept is good though, and it can be expanded. what i wanted to see when i read mercanary group on earth and then world travel was not the mc finishing on earth and then moving on, but more the likes of an interdimensional mercanary group with the headquarter on earth portals to different worlds. that'd be cool(i have only read to chapter 8 so i don't know if its going in this direction)