Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potential

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This novel is still still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.

If one can spam fake 5 stars reviews, Does it mean is ok tk spam one stars as well? Im am taking that logic as a yes.... Shameless author just how many accts you have? Of course excluding the fresh bloods

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Writing quality criticism: " This is wrong way to space quotation marks . " "This is the right way to space quotation marks." Character design criticism: Readers will appreciate it if you describe how the main character looks, what he wants to do overall, and what his favorite things are. Favorite things as in hobbies, quirks, etc. In other words detail! Give me something to help imagine the scene. Word background criticism: What year is it? How does that time period differ? Has peoples fashion sense changed? Describe the environment in the planet. Anything else about the human culture different? Is KFC still on the downturn in the United States?!! Is the United States now called The Colnel Confederacy? Thanks

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This novel is STILL even incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.